Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 5

By: SMEAR

SMEAR — Fri, 13 Mar 2009 18:54:38 +0000

I’m having a good time.

By: Aysha

Aysha — Fri, 03 Aug 2007 00:29:12 +0000

this is a very good chapter! i even felt a little irritated by andy being such an asshole! keep up the great work!

By: Story Hack - Oasis: Chapter 4

Story Hack - Oasis: Chapter 4 — Tue, 19 Jun 2007 21:05:17 +0000

[...] next – Chapter 5: Home Sweet Home? [...]

By: Cory

Cory — Tue, 19 Jun 2007 18:53:21 +0000

Okay, I’m hooked!

Man, Corbin should have been packing his own piece! Then he coulda whipped it out and showed those suckas what’s up! Andy’s going down, though. I can feel it.

By: Bryce Beattie

Bryce Beattie — Mon, 21 Aug 2006 15:29:59 +0000

Yes. Sorry, I had another project that I was working on, but now that’s done and There’ll be another update this week.

By: Abi79

Abi79 — Sun, 20 Aug 2006 10:51:33 +0000

So, will there be more chapters?

By: olympian

olympian — Tue, 25 Jul 2006 18:01:56 +0000

Chapter 1
Something about the whole deal made my gut churn. Oasis never had much of a flu season, in fact, I happened to know that the hospital only ordered fifteen flu shots a year and most of them went to waste. So why would the Red Cross set this up? (Omit sentence) Why would they do it at the same time as a blood drive? Why would they do it in July? There were just too many questions. Sometimes curiosity wins (from wind) out over tiredness. I just had to find out what was going on. I headed for the trailer’s stairs.

(Begining quotes) “Yes, now you need to send someone out here to get a sample of whatever this guy was injected with.”

chapter 3
�Yeah, you were definitely the cute one.� I smiled again. �I mean you are the cute one.� (italics added)