Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 10

By: SMEAR

SMEAR — Fri, 13 Mar 2009 19:49:23 +0000

A lot of great writers where terrible spellers. That’s what editors are for…dont sweat the small stuff.

By: Bryce Beattie

Bryce Beattie — Wed, 30 Jan 2008 22:13:50 +0000

Stephanie – would it be so wrong for Corbin to imply that he himself had foresight?

By: Stephanie

Stephanie — Wed, 30 Jan 2008 21:52:01 +0000

Oh, and fortunately was spelled wrong, but I’m pretty sure no one will care.

By: Stephanie

Stephanie — Wed, 30 Jan 2008 21:51:27 +0000

“Fortunatley, someone had the foresight to re-lock the gate after I had come in.” Yeah that someone, was Corbin, you already said he re-locked it when he opened before while that guy went to ask Andy if Corbin could come in.

By: Story Hack - Oasis: Chapter 9

Story Hack - Oasis: Chapter 9 — Wed, 02 May 2007 13:06:04 +0000

[...] next – Chapter 10: Infection At The Door [...]

By: Mark

Mark — Thu, 29 Mar 2007 20:16:53 +0000

Oh yea, and if it wasn’t obvious…. Yes, this IS Private Mark

By: Mark

Mark — Thu, 29 Mar 2007 20:16:08 +0000

Just noticed (and read) this now. Excellent stuff, Altair. Didn’t know you wrote stories also!

By: Abi79

Abi79 — Fri, 02 Feb 2007 19:14:23 +0000

Very, very nice Altair, or what’s your real name. I applaud your story. Can’t wait for the next part.

Cheers!