Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 11 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/04/13/oasis-chapter-11/ Action Adventure Fiction Fri, 05 Sep 2008 23:19:42 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Bryce Beattie http://www.storyhack.com/2007/04/13/oasis-chapter-11/#comment-2272 Bryce Beattie Wed, 30 Jan 2008 22:29:58 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/04/13/oasis-chapter-11/#comment-2272 I made the conscious decision to not put a lot of physical description about the characters -just put a hint here or there- because I didn't feel like it was necessary to the story. In general, I imagine characters in stories I read based on their personality, regardless of description that is written. Perhaps I've erred on the "not enough" side in this story, though. Thanks for taking the time to read. I made the conscious decision to not put a lot of physical description about the characters -just put a hint here or there- because I didn’t feel like it was necessary to the story. In general, I imagine characters in stories I read based on their personality, regardless of description that is written. Perhaps I’ve erred on the “not enough” side in this story, though.

Thanks for taking the time to read.

]]> By: Stephanie http://www.storyhack.com/2007/04/13/oasis-chapter-11/#comment-2268 Stephanie Wed, 30 Jan 2008 22:03:40 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/04/13/oasis-chapter-11/#comment-2268 I read another zombie story called "36 hours". True it seemed to copy the movie 28 days (don't know if it's a book or not), but it's still better writing than this story. It's very descriptive, whereas this one isn't. I kind of have to imagine what the scenes are since this author won't really help out. By the way, why aren't there ANY descriptions of what people look like?????!!! I read another zombie story called “36 hours”. True it seemed to copy the movie 28 days (don’t know if it’s a book or not), but it’s still better writing than this story. It’s very descriptive, whereas this one isn’t. I kind of have to imagine what the scenes are since this author won’t really help out. By the way, why aren’t there ANY descriptions of what people look like?????!!!

]]> By: Some Guy http://www.storyhack.com/2007/04/13/oasis-chapter-11/#comment-65 Some Guy Tue, 26 Jun 2007 22:47:18 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/04/13/oasis-chapter-11/#comment-65 This is the best zombie story I've read in a while. This is almost as good as Dawn of the Dead. Keep it up, you're doing great! This is the best zombie story I’ve read in a while. This is almost as good as Dawn of the Dead. Keep it up, you’re doing great!

]]> By: Story Hack - Oasis: Chapter 10 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/04/13/oasis-chapter-11/#comment-23 Story Hack - Oasis: Chapter 10 Wed, 02 May 2007 13:02:56 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/04/13/oasis-chapter-11/#comment-23 [...] Next - Chapter 11: Farewell to Millers Crossing [...] [...] Next - Chapter 11: Farewell to Millers Crossing [...]

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