Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 12 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/02/oasis-chapter-12/ Action Adventure Fiction and Other Stuff from Bryce Beattie Wed, 08 Feb 2012 04:53:53 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Bryce Beattie http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/02/oasis-chapter-12/comment-page-1/#comment-6187 Bryce Beattie Fri, 23 Oct 2009 15:09:58 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/02/oasis-chapter-12/#comment-6187 Oh, yuck. It should read "gave way". Oh, yuck. It should read “gave way”.

]]> By: Ballsack McNasty http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/02/oasis-chapter-12/comment-page-1/#comment-6185 Ballsack McNasty Fri, 23 Oct 2009 13:31:21 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/02/oasis-chapter-12/#comment-6185 First and foremost, a very enjoyable read thus far. I am a grammar and spelling fiend myself, but when you "get" what is being said, it doesn't really matter. However, I am lost on this sentence - "Soon enough, the houses gave was to machine shops and small factories." Not being nit-picky, just curious to know what was intended. Thank you! Must continue... First and foremost, a very enjoyable read thus far. I am a grammar and spelling fiend myself, but when you “get” what is being said, it doesn’t really matter.

However, I am lost on this sentence – “Soon enough, the houses gave was to machine shops and small factories.”

Not being nit-picky, just curious to know what was intended. Thank you! Must continue…

]]> By: SMEAR http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/02/oasis-chapter-12/comment-page-1/#comment-5114 SMEAR Fri, 13 Mar 2009 20:12:19 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/02/oasis-chapter-12/#comment-5114 I was also pleased when you decided to get your guy out of that looney-bin apartment house. I was also pleased when you decided to get your guy out of that looney-bin apartment house.

]]> By: Ricky http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/02/oasis-chapter-12/comment-page-1/#comment-28 Ricky Tue, 22 May 2007 00:27:56 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/02/oasis-chapter-12/#comment-28 I am really enjoying your story. You have really caught my attention and gotten me involved with the story. Please tell me how often you post new chapters so that I don't have to constantly check on the site. I am really enjoying your story. You have really caught my attention and gotten me involved with the story. Please tell me how often you post new chapters so that I don’t have to constantly check on the site.

]]> By: gdcol1969 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/02/oasis-chapter-12/comment-page-1/#comment-27 gdcol1969 Sun, 20 May 2007 20:27:44 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/02/oasis-chapter-12/#comment-27 Not a note on the chapter, but a note on the story. I just wanted you to know just how much I am truly enjoying your story. I was hoping that you wouldn't leave your character stuck in the apartment building. That seemed to me to be suicide. Anyhow, please keep the chapters coming! Thanks Not a note on the chapter, but a note on the story. I just wanted you to know just how much I am truly enjoying your story. I was hoping that you wouldn’t leave your character stuck in the apartment building. That seemed to me to be suicide. Anyhow, please keep the chapters coming! Thanks

]]> By: Story Hack - Oasis: Chapter 11 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/02/oasis-chapter-12/comment-page-1/#comment-22 Story Hack - Oasis: Chapter 11 Wed, 02 May 2007 13:01:54 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/02/oasis-chapter-12/#comment-22 [...] next - Chapter 12: Life On The Street [...] [...] next – Chapter 12: Life On The Street [...]

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