Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 13 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/23/oasis-chapter-13/ Adventure Fiction & Self Publishing Fri, 21 Nov 2008 20:37:19 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.3 By: Stephanie http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/23/oasis-chapter-13/#comment-2269 Stephanie Wed, 30 Jan 2008 22:11:07 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/23/oasis-chapter-13/#comment-2269 Ok, if you're going to send this to a publisher, your "best best" (or best bet) would be to work on you're spelling more. Like, watter (I'm assuming, it's meant to be water? lol). I'm sorry for being so negative in my comments. But dude, please pay attention to your spelling and give more descriptions, it makes the story SO much better! Ok, if you’re going to send this to a publisher, your “best best” (or best bet) would be to work on you’re spelling more. Like, watter (I’m assuming, it’s meant to be water? lol). I’m sorry for being so negative in my comments. But dude, please pay attention to your spelling and give more descriptions, it makes the story SO much better!

]]> By: Barton G http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/23/oasis-chapter-13/#comment-69 Barton G Thu, 05 Jul 2007 00:14:31 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/23/oasis-chapter-13/#comment-69 In a way, the anticipation of waiting it out makes the chapters extra good. Good work. In a way, the anticipation of waiting it out makes the chapters extra good. Good work.

]]> By: Andrew http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/23/oasis-chapter-13/#comment-48 Andrew Mon, 18 Jun 2007 05:16:02 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/23/oasis-chapter-13/#comment-48 Excellent job; a good take on a classic story. Excellent job; a good take on a classic story.

]]> By: Emerson Vella http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/23/oasis-chapter-13/#comment-45 Emerson Vella Thu, 14 Jun 2007 03:26:17 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/23/oasis-chapter-13/#comment-45 Is there any more to come man? I keep revisiting the page once a week hoping for more but... Well, good luck to you with your writing. Please dont keep us on our toes!! Is there any more to come man? I keep revisiting the page once a week hoping for more but…

Well, good luck to you with your writing. Please dont keep us on our toes!!

]]> By: will http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/23/oasis-chapter-13/#comment-35 will Thu, 31 May 2007 20:31:50 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/23/oasis-chapter-13/#comment-35 holy crap! your wok is amazing! send it to a publisher! I swear it rocks! holy crap! your wok is amazing! send it to a publisher! I swear it rocks!

]]> By: Emerson Vella http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/23/oasis-chapter-13/#comment-33 Emerson Vella Thu, 24 May 2007 22:44:05 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/23/oasis-chapter-13/#comment-33 Dude, that is SICK! [Edited] amazing!! Can't wait for more to come man :D Dude, that is SICK! [Edited] amazing!! Can’t wait for more to come man :D

]]> By: Story Hack - Oasis: Chapter 12 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/23/oasis-chapter-13/#comment-29 Story Hack - Oasis: Chapter 12 Wed, 23 May 2007 14:16:15 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/05/23/oasis-chapter-13/#comment-29 [...] next - Chapter 13: A Very Serious Mistake [...] [...] next - Chapter 13: A Very Serious Mistake [...]

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