Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 18 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/08/10/oasis-chapter-18/ Action Adventure Fiction Fri, 05 Sep 2008 23:23:16 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Emerson http://www.storyhack.com/2007/08/10/oasis-chapter-18/#comment-1430 Emerson Sun, 04 Nov 2007 16:07:34 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/08/10/oasis-chapter-18/#comment-1430 Hah good one!! I love the twist!! Hoping for some more action in the next chapter :) Hah good one!! I love the twist!! Hoping for some more action in the next chapter :)

]]> By: mikey http://www.storyhack.com/2007/08/10/oasis-chapter-18/#comment-98 mikey Wed, 15 Aug 2007 01:47:57 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/08/10/oasis-chapter-18/#comment-98 This is one hell of a tale, Your writing style is fluid, but you leave just enough detail for the reader to create the mental movie that this story is. I also kinda dig the retro Stan Lee taunts for the next chapters. The titles of each chapter are fun too. Good stuff ya got here, Thanks so much!! This is one hell of a tale, Your writing style is fluid, but you leave just enough detail for the reader to create the mental movie that this story is. I also kinda dig the retro Stan Lee taunts for the next chapters. The titles of each chapter are fun too. Good stuff ya got here, Thanks so much!!

]]> By: Matt http://www.storyhack.com/2007/08/10/oasis-chapter-18/#comment-96 Matt Sun, 12 Aug 2007 16:55:47 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/08/10/oasis-chapter-18/#comment-96 This story is too addictive!!! Well onto pins and needles I go... This story is too addictive!!! Well onto pins and needles I go…

]]> By: Michael http://www.storyhack.com/2007/08/10/oasis-chapter-18/#comment-95 Michael Sat, 11 Aug 2007 10:46:50 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/08/10/oasis-chapter-18/#comment-95 oh sure, leave the suspense hanging dammit! another WEEK! >:o good job, top story oh sure, leave the suspense hanging
dammit! another WEEK! >:o

good job, top story

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