Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 20 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/08/24/oasis-chapter-20/ Adventure Fiction & Self Publishing Fri, 21 Nov 2008 22:53:07 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.3 By: Mat http://www.storyhack.com/2007/08/24/oasis-chapter-20/#comment-116 Mat Thu, 30 Aug 2007 23:59:26 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/08/24/oasis-chapter-20/#comment-116 first, LoL. second, how the hell did you get to lvl 41?! and this is me: http://www.urbandead.com/profile.cgi?id=958346 yea, I suck at that game... anywho, on to the topic at hand.. waiting eagerly for next update:( first, LoL.

second, how the hell did you get to lvl 41?!

and this is me:
http://www.urbandead.com/profile.cgi?id=958346

yea, I suck at that game…

anywho, on to the topic at hand.. waiting eagerly for next update:(

]]> By: Ricky http://www.storyhack.com/2007/08/24/oasis-chapter-20/#comment-115 Ricky Thu, 30 Aug 2007 23:04:19 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/08/24/oasis-chapter-20/#comment-115 Mat, if you like Urban Dead youll like this site http://kevan.org/brain.cgi?Final_Prodigy also, my character url is this http://urbandead.com/profile.cgi?id=723489 Mat, if you like Urban Dead youll like this site

http://kevan.org/brain.cgi?Final_Prodigy

also, my character url is this

http://urbandead.com/profile.cgi?id=723489

]]> By: Mat http://www.storyhack.com/2007/08/24/oasis-chapter-20/#comment-112 Mat Wed, 29 Aug 2007 21:34:50 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/08/24/oasis-chapter-20/#comment-112 One point I think you might wanna raise, how dark is corbin's skin to make so many ppl think he's a terrorist?! anywho, awesome story.. just found the link on urban dead.. I wish you were farther ahead:) One point I think you might wanna raise, how dark is corbin’s skin to make so many ppl think he’s a terrorist?!

anywho, awesome story.. just found the link on urban dead.. I wish you were farther ahead:)

]]> By: Bryce Beattie http://www.storyhack.com/2007/08/24/oasis-chapter-20/#comment-111 Bryce Beattie Tue, 28 Aug 2007 12:59:31 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/08/24/oasis-chapter-20/#comment-111 I don't mind at all. I'd rather know and get things fixed. Besides, pointing out a typo isn't exactly criticizing. I don’t mind at all. I’d rather know and get things fixed. Besides, pointing out a typo isn’t exactly criticizing.

]]> By: Ricky http://www.storyhack.com/2007/08/24/oasis-chapter-20/#comment-109 Ricky Tue, 28 Aug 2007 03:10:09 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/08/24/oasis-chapter-20/#comment-109 I feel like a jerk for criticizing, and I hope you don't take this the wrong way, but I think you misspelled a word again. I just felt that you would like to know, because I know I would. If I'm getting on your nerves, please tell me. Other than that, continue the good work! “Uncle Carl, don’t be an idiot.” She pushed me arm and stepped back in front. I feel like a jerk for criticizing, and I hope you don’t take this the wrong way, but I think you misspelled a word again. I just felt that you would like to know, because I know I would. If I’m getting on your nerves, please tell me. Other than that, continue the good work!

“Uncle Carl, don’t be an idiot.” She pushed me arm and stepped back in front.

]]> By: Michael http://www.storyhack.com/2007/08/24/oasis-chapter-20/#comment-107 Michael Sun, 26 Aug 2007 11:10:01 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/08/24/oasis-chapter-20/#comment-107 coooool just starting to get some proper, anti zombie action. coooool
just starting to get some proper, anti zombie action.

]]> By: Glenn http://www.storyhack.com/2007/08/24/oasis-chapter-20/#comment-106 Glenn Fri, 24 Aug 2007 17:49:10 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/08/24/oasis-chapter-20/#comment-106 Sir, Just wanted you to know just how much I'm enjoying your story. Keep it coming! I look forward to Fridays anyhow, but this just gives me another reason. Sir,
Just wanted you to know just how much I’m enjoying your story. Keep it coming! I look forward to Fridays anyhow, but this just gives me another reason.

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