Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 24 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/09/21/oasis-chapter-24/ Adventure Fiction & Self Publishing Fri, 21 Nov 2008 23:45:25 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.3 By: Jen http://www.storyhack.com/2007/09/21/oasis-chapter-24/#comment-4632 Jen Fri, 18 Jul 2008 06:20:19 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/09/21/oasis-chapter-24/#comment-4632 nice .good nice .good

]]> By: Bryce Beattie http://www.storyhack.com/2007/09/21/oasis-chapter-24/#comment-1203 Bryce Beattie Fri, 19 Oct 2007 15:27:13 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/09/21/oasis-chapter-24/#comment-1203 Ricky -> It's cool. You guys are cheaper than a professional editor, anyway. Ricky -> It’s cool. You guys are cheaper than a professional editor, anyway.

]]> By: Ricky http://www.storyhack.com/2007/09/21/oasis-chapter-24/#comment-1192 Ricky Fri, 19 Oct 2007 00:12:32 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/09/21/oasis-chapter-24/#comment-1192 Dude, I'm sorry I keep pointing these things out "There may have been a lot of love, but there was also a while lot of fear." I think you meant whole instead of while. Other than that, the storyline is great! Dude, I’m sorry I keep pointing these things out

“There may have been a lot of love, but there was also a while lot of fear.”

I think you meant whole instead of while. Other than that, the storyline is great!

]]> By: glenn http://www.storyhack.com/2007/09/21/oasis-chapter-24/#comment-431 glenn Sat, 22 Sep 2007 22:00:26 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/09/21/oasis-chapter-24/#comment-431 Bryce, Excellent chapter! That Carl guy is a true slug and I hope that Corbin helps him out, right outside is what I mean, with the infected. Anyhow, thanks again for keeping me hooked. Keep it up! A Constant Reader, Glenn Bryce,
Excellent chapter! That Carl guy is a true slug and I hope that Corbin helps him out, right outside is what I mean, with the infected. Anyhow, thanks again for keeping me hooked. Keep it up!

A Constant Reader,

Glenn

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