Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 25

By: john

john — Sat, 11 Apr 2009 03:19:44 +0000

dude whats wrong with this chapter? i mean there is like thousands of wuestion marks and comas

By: Tony

Tony — Wed, 03 Oct 2007 23:53:45 +0000

Yet another great chapter, keep em coming!

By: Bryce Beattie

Bryce Beattie — Mon, 01 Oct 2007 13:18:37 +0000

Thanks you guys.

Me make grammar mistakes? Unpossible!

By: DarcKnyt

DarcKnyt — Sat, 29 Sep 2007 21:54:08 +0000

Hey, Bryce, I’ve caught up with your story. I think you’ve done a really good job with this.

There are a few grammatical issues, and I think I get a bit confused with the time table, but other than that, it’s moving nicely along!

I’ll check back for future chapters and see how it pans out!

By: ZuluDown

ZuluDown — Sat, 29 Sep 2007 10:19:53 +0000

Great story, man. I found your website because it was spraypainted on the wall of a building, in a game called Urban Dead.

I’m part of an Urban Anti-Cadaver Force Recon unit, and I was scouting for undead when I pased a factory that had some graffiti on it. Aparantly someone who played had found your site, and decided to spraypaint it on the side of the factory. I’m just glad they shared, because this stuff is great!