Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 25 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/09/28/oasis-chapter-25/ Adventure Fiction & Self Publishing Fri, 21 Nov 2008 19:58:08 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.3 By: Tony http://www.storyhack.com/2007/09/28/oasis-chapter-25/#comment-849 Tony Wed, 03 Oct 2007 23:53:45 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/09/28/oasis-chapter-25/#comment-849 Yet another great chapter, keep em coming! Yet another great chapter, keep em coming!

]]> By: Bryce Beattie http://www.storyhack.com/2007/09/28/oasis-chapter-25/#comment-738 Bryce Beattie Mon, 01 Oct 2007 13:18:37 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/09/28/oasis-chapter-25/#comment-738 Thanks you guys. Me make grammar mistakes? Unpossible! Thanks you guys.

Me make grammar mistakes? Unpossible!

]]> By: DarcKnyt http://www.storyhack.com/2007/09/28/oasis-chapter-25/#comment-677 DarcKnyt Sat, 29 Sep 2007 21:54:08 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/09/28/oasis-chapter-25/#comment-677 Hey, Bryce, I've caught up with your story. I think you've done a really good job with this. There are a few grammatical issues, and I think I get a bit confused with the time table, but other than that, it's moving nicely along! I'll check back for future chapters and see how it pans out! Hey, Bryce, I’ve caught up with your story. I think you’ve done a really good job with this.

There are a few grammatical issues, and I think I get a bit confused with the time table, but other than that, it’s moving nicely along!

I’ll check back for future chapters and see how it pans out!

]]> By: ZuluDown http://www.storyhack.com/2007/09/28/oasis-chapter-25/#comment-652 ZuluDown Sat, 29 Sep 2007 10:19:53 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/09/28/oasis-chapter-25/#comment-652 Great story, man. I found your website because it was spraypainted on the wall of a building, in a game called Urban Dead. I'm part of an Urban Anti-Cadaver Force Recon unit, and I was scouting for undead when I pased a factory that had some graffiti on it. Aparantly someone who played had found your site, and decided to spraypaint it on the side of the factory. I'm just glad they shared, because this stuff is great! Great story, man. I found your website because it was spraypainted on the wall of a building, in a game called Urban Dead.

I’m part of an Urban Anti-Cadaver Force Recon unit, and I was scouting for undead when I pased a factory that had some graffiti on it. Aparantly someone who played had found your site, and decided to spraypaint it on the side of the factory. I’m just glad they shared, because this stuff is great!

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