Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 26 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/10/04/oasis-chapter-26/ Action Adventure Fiction Fri, 05 Sep 2008 23:18:58 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Bryce Beattie http://www.storyhack.com/2007/10/04/oasis-chapter-26/#comment-1084 Bryce Beattie Fri, 12 Oct 2007 05:35:34 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/10/04/oasis-chapter-26/#comment-1084 Fixed. Thanks. Fixed. Thanks.

]]> By: DarcKnyt http://www.storyhack.com/2007/10/04/oasis-chapter-26/#comment-903 DarcKnyt Fri, 05 Oct 2007 23:17:53 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/10/04/oasis-chapter-26/#comment-903 Nice piece, Bryce! One small crit -- you've spelled "exciting" as "exiting". It's Corbin making his wish. Nice job again! Can't wait for next week! Nice piece, Bryce!

One small crit — you’ve spelled “exciting” as “exiting”. It’s Corbin making his wish.

Nice job again! Can’t wait for next week!

]]> By: Isabeau http://www.storyhack.com/2007/10/04/oasis-chapter-26/#comment-897 Isabeau Fri, 05 Oct 2007 17:28:01 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/10/04/oasis-chapter-26/#comment-897 Oooo! The suspense Oooo!
The suspense

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