Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 30

By: Stephanie

Stephanie — Thu, 31 Jan 2008 15:50:49 +0000

“We walked the rest of the bay to the bathroom in silence.” The rest of the WAY maybe?

By: Clay

Clay — Wed, 23 Jan 2008 17:55:45 +0000

Found you through a spray in Urbandead too. Read through the archives. Love it! Can’t wait for next chapter.

By: Leonie

Leonie — Fri, 11 Jan 2008 11:49:27 +0000

Great read, but where is the rest?

I cannot wait for the rest of the story.

PLEASE continue

By: Rob

Rob — Tue, 13 Nov 2007 21:59:45 +0000

wow
i love it
i only got the link today and i am hooked

although i must admit i don’t feel all that much for Corbin - after all it is his tongue that gets him into trouble sometimes in the story

By: Bart

Bart — Sun, 04 Nov 2007 20:48:13 +0000

That was a great chapter. The characters are really coming to life and I feel more emotion with the action now than I did at the start. I’d like to see Corbin do something to Carl, not only because I hate Carl and like Corbin, but because it would undoubtedly add some tension to the chemistry between the protagonist and Beth. Maybe a love/hate thing, revelation of truth and mutual forgiveness - I don’t know … you’re the writer here!

By: DarcKnyt

DarcKnyt — Fri, 02 Nov 2007 22:24:14 +0000

This was a really satisfying entry, bud! Nicely worded, a great length … I can’t wait for next week’s installment.

By: Glenn

Glenn — Fri, 02 Nov 2007 19:04:43 +0000

Bryce,
I’m very glad that you let Corbin get the better of Carl. That dude is a total oxygen thief! I truly hate a bully. If you couldn’t tell, you’ve pretty much sucked me in to the story! Really though, at some point in time you’ve got to give the poor guy a break. Anyhow, keep ‘em coming and thanks again for the book!

Glenn