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Oasis: Chapter 33

[note: Sorry about the lateness of this one. Today has been crazy. If you are new to Oasis, start with Chapter 1.]

Red Shoes

Help And Red Shoes

The yelling got louder.

I knew they had to be close, so I slowed down and kept moving toward the sound. I still wasn’t sure why I was going or what I was going to do when I got there.

Three flares shot up into the air in rapid succession. They came from close by, probably just around to the other side of the block.

I hugged the brick wall of the insurance office on the corner and peeked around.

There was a row of stores, mostly antique dealerships and oriental rug shops, all of whose windows had been smashed. Nestled toward the center was a two-story apartment building.

Gathered around the front door of the apartment building was a mob of perhaps ten deads. They were pounding tirelessly at what was left of the front door.

I couldn’t be certain, but it appeared that there was at least one survivor on the other side trying to sure up the door with a table.

Two teenage girls and one middle aged man were at the windows on the second floor, calling for help.

I recoiled, closed my eyes and took a deep breath.

What am I doing here?

I felt a sudden rush of guilt for attacking Carl and his son. I wasn’t a violent person. I had already spent a good portion of my life saving others. Now I seemed to be thrust into situation after situation where I had no other choice but to hurt.

No, I had a choice.

That alone was enough to make me feel sick inside.

Maybe I was trying to make up for my mistakes by helping out here. But what could I do?

Only one thing to do.

I tightened the straps of my backpack, held the bat so I could swing it hard, and stepped around the corner.

One of the girls caught site of me and screamed all the louder.

I took a few steps and looked up. “Get back inside! I’ll try to lead them away!”

What am I doing?

I pushed away the doubt and listened to my gut. I had to do something.

Even with the yelling, the deads didn’t seem to notice me.

I would have to do something more drastic.

The yellers disappeared into the building.

It was up to me.

I set my jaw and clenched the bat.

“Hey! Come get me!”

They still didn’t notice. At least, none of them turned my way.

I marched up to just a few feet behind them and froze.

I caught a glimpse of frightened eyes as the table shifted and survivors struggled to get it back in place.

“Listen to me!” I took a step and I took a swing.

Right in the back of the head. Just like with Beth’s infected uncle.

The infected body crumpled to the ground.

The three closest deads turned and grabbed out at me.

I scrambled back. “Come on!”

The closest dead missed me by at least a couple of inches.

I took another two steps back. “You want some of this?”

Two deads stepped toward me. The closest one crouched as if to dive.

I shuffled back and held the bat high.

The dead man pounced.

I brought down the bat.

I caught him mid-air.

Right on top of the head.

The bat made a satisfying “clonk” sound and shook in my hands.

His hands brushed my arms on his quick trip down.

No time to celebrate.

The second dead crouched.

I stumbled backwards, hoping to get out of range.

It was enough, but I lost my balance and fell onto my butt. The bat slipped out of my hand and flew somewhere behind me.

The second dead hit the ground at the same time I did, groping out for my leg. The third just kept walking. The other six still pressed on the door.

I rolled over and pushed to my feet like a sprinter.

Out of the corner of my eye, I saw movement down the street.

The second dead raised up on her hands and the third pressed forward.

I ran for the fallen bat and took another glance at the movement down the street.

Several blocks down and running toward me was a man carried by two red shoes. Shoes I had seen before.


OasisWhat does the red-shoed man want? Continue on to “Chapter 34: Rescue OperationI am just sure Oasis could work as a musical. You want proof? Go listen to “RE: Your Brains” by Johnathan Coulton. (Its the link that says “Re Your Brains” on his post…)

That being said, I’d be happy with a scifi network miniseries. So go talk to your people and see what you can do for me.

Or at least tell someone about Oasis. What, do I have to beg?

Posted: December 7, 2007
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Category: fiction

Comments (5 Responses)

December 7th, 2007 DarcKnyt

Hey, Bryce, nice job. Good tension and suspense. Here’s a tiny problem:

Three res flares shot up…

December 8th, 2007 Rob

wow

amazing

your really good

man i wish i could write like your for my englush stuff ….

December 8th, 2007 Glenn

Good one Bryce…leaving us hanging again..as usual. Gotta love it! Keep it up!

December 9th, 2007 Bart

Nothing like a little Corbin on zombie action to brighten my day. Good work.

January 9th, 2009 Pip

Enjoying this, but found a few errors – bane of a writer’s life I’m sure.
1. “two-story” – two-storey
2. “sure up the door” – shore up the door
3. “caught site of me” – caught sight of me

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