Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 33 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/12/07/oasis-chapter-33/ Action Adventure Fiction Thu, 24 Jul 2008 11:12:12 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Bart http://www.storyhack.com/2007/12/07/oasis-chapter-33/#comment-2066 Bart Sun, 09 Dec 2007 20:54:57 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/12/07/oasis-chapter-33/#comment-2066 Nothing like a little Corbin on zombie action to brighten my day. Good work. Nothing like a little Corbin on zombie action to brighten my day. Good work.

]]> By: Glenn http://www.storyhack.com/2007/12/07/oasis-chapter-33/#comment-2062 Glenn Sat, 08 Dec 2007 15:44:22 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/12/07/oasis-chapter-33/#comment-2062 Good one Bryce...leaving us hanging again..as usual. Gotta love it! Keep it up! Good one Bryce…leaving us hanging again..as usual. Gotta love it! Keep it up!

]]> By: Rob http://www.storyhack.com/2007/12/07/oasis-chapter-33/#comment-2059 Rob Sat, 08 Dec 2007 07:36:33 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/12/07/oasis-chapter-33/#comment-2059 wow amazing your really good man i wish i could write like your for my englush stuff .... wow

amazing

your really good

man i wish i could write like your for my englush stuff ….

]]> By: DarcKnyt http://www.storyhack.com/2007/12/07/oasis-chapter-33/#comment-2055 DarcKnyt Fri, 07 Dec 2007 22:21:06 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2007/12/07/oasis-chapter-33/#comment-2055 Hey, Bryce, nice job. Good tension and suspense. Here's a tiny problem: <i>Three <b>res</b> flares shot up...</i> Hey, Bryce, nice job. Good tension and suspense. Here’s a tiny problem:

Three res flares shot up…

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