Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 33

By: Pip

Pip — Fri, 09 Jan 2009 21:56:08 +0000

Enjoying this, but found a few errors – bane of a writer’s life I’m sure.
1. “two-story” – two-storey
2. “sure up the door” – shore up the door
3. “caught site of me” – caught sight of me

By: Bart

Bart — Sun, 09 Dec 2007 20:54:57 +0000

Nothing like a little Corbin on zombie action to brighten my day. Good work.

By: Glenn

Glenn — Sat, 08 Dec 2007 15:44:22 +0000

Good one Bryce…leaving us hanging again..as usual. Gotta love it! Keep it up!

By: Rob

Rob — Sat, 08 Dec 2007 07:36:33 +0000

wow

amazing

your really good

man i wish i could write like your for my englush stuff ….

By: DarcKnyt

DarcKnyt — Fri, 07 Dec 2007 22:21:06 +0000

Hey, Bryce, nice job. Good tension and suspense. Here’s a tiny problem:

Three res flares shot up…