Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 34

By: Pip

Pip — Fri, 09 Jan 2009 22:04:46 +0000

1. “How does he knows that” – How does he know that
2. “We wont have much time” – We won’t have much time
3. “I new morning” – I knew morning
4. “five story” – five-storey

By: Bart

Bart — Wed, 19 Dec 2007 05:18:02 +0000

Nice cliffhanger. It kind of reminds me of the way the TV show Alias always ended with one.

By: Cory

Cory — Mon, 17 Dec 2007 18:46:52 +0000

I think it woulda been funny to put a trashcan over the top of one of the infecteds and let it run around bumping into stuff. In fact, I wanna start a campaign: Trashcan hats for all the infecteds!

Nice chapter, dude!

By: Rob Smith

Rob Smith — Sat, 15 Dec 2007 12:17:32 +0000

ooh – you’ve got me hooked

i can imagine this lad turning and saying that last line…

By: DarcKnyt

DarcKnyt — Sat, 15 Dec 2007 01:29:41 +0000

Nice piece, Bryce! Very well done. Nothing jumped out at me as out of place or incomplete.

This is really fun. It’s been a blast so far, and I can’t wait for next week. (Now that I have more time to read, I want to read more.)

By: Taehl

Taehl — Fri, 14 Dec 2007 22:50:39 +0000

As usual, your writing moves at the perfect pace. I’m in awe, and will wait with eager anticipation for the next chapter. Hopefully it’ll be out for Christmas (or sooner ).

By: dylan

dylan — Fri, 14 Dec 2007 16:39:33 +0000

a good name wud be the grand hotel