Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 36

By: Pip

Pip — Fri, 09 Jan 2009 22:16:46 +0000

basball – baseball

By: Taehl

Taehl — Fri, 04 Jan 2008 11:38:58 +0000

Amazing work. I am, as I have been since Chapter 1, enthralled by your story and will be on the very edge of waiting patiently until the next chapter arrives.

By: DamJam

DamJam — Sun, 30 Dec 2007 07:48:02 +0000

This episode is amazing, i usually tell anyone who is interested in horror about this story, why don’t you write a book, i haven’t seem any zombie survival novels around, this could delve into uncharterd waters and make you a lot of money.

By: Rob Smith

Rob Smith — Sat, 29 Dec 2007 19:01:23 +0000

yeah we don’t need paying as we got to enjoy your brilliant story !

By: Bryce Beattie

Bryce Beattie — Sat, 29 Dec 2007 07:35:29 +0000

I actually don’t mind folks pointing out my typos and such. Sometimes I post without doing proper proofing… Its nice to have a team of editors hard at work for me.

By: DarcKnyt

DarcKnyt — Sat, 29 Dec 2007 05:55:47 +0000

Bryce – I’m just hoping it doesn’t come off arrogant or condescending when I point things out like that. I know as a writer myself, I need all the proofing help I can get. But I always mean it in a spirit of trying to help Oasis along, so if it’s coming across in any other way, please forgive me — I don’t mean it to. I’ve really like the story up to this point and can’t wait to see it carry through.

See you next Friday!

By: ZombieHobbit

ZombieHobbit — Sat, 29 Dec 2007 02:53:27 +0000

God’s be dancing, I love this story.

Very well done, Bryce. I love zombies and everything to do with them.

By: Bryce Beattie

Bryce Beattie — Fri, 28 Dec 2007 23:35:48 +0000

darcknyt – Thanks for the typo/forgotten word alerts. I’m not exactly sure where that apostrophe-’s’ came from, but its gone now. And thanks for the encouragement.

By: DarcKnyt

DarcKnyt — Fri, 28 Dec 2007 22:00:56 +0000

I’ve hung a hand-painted sign on the front door of my house and left flyers on everyone’s doorknob in the neighborhood, proclaiming the wonders of Oasis. It’s only a matter of time and numbers now, Bryce.

I think we should have you write a virus that puts a PDF copy of it on every hard drive on the Internet too. Or a trojan horse or worm that redirects everyone to this site from their current homepage.

Couple o’ things I caught in this very engaging chapter:

“I only wanted them to shut up so I could hear what Samson was saying. It just feel right to yell at them, though.”
Probably should be “It just didn’t feel right …”

Nathan�s coughed a little. �Warm.�
The apostrophe here is misplaced, I think.

This is a good episode, Bryce, one of the best. The little slow down before building up gradually again is good. It really helps settle the story and emphasizes the crush of activity and harrowing nature of the fast-spreading disease they can’t really seem to stay ahead of or away from.

I also really like that the survivors have to continually make snap decisions about their wounded and dead before things get out of control. Very realistic in that regard.

Can’t wait for next week’s installment!

God bless, bud!