Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 38

By: Stephanie

Stephanie — Thu, 31 Jan 2008 16:40:28 +0000

“You just pissed off the wrong lawyer”?! hahahahahahahahahahaha, what makes this pompous ass, think a LAWYER is useful in a time like this??!! roflcopter

By: Bart

Bart — Thu, 17 Jan 2008 17:23:52 +0000

A rocking chapter, as always.

By: DarcKnyt

DarcKnyt — Tue, 15 Jan 2008 10:33:10 +0000

Hey, Bryce! Great job, again! This nice little lull helps ratchet up the coming tension while giving the reader a chance to (finally!) catch their breath. Fantastic work.

But … you didn’t quite get all the typos …
There were several large room used for receptions and banquets.
Probably should be “rooms.”

God bless, buddy. Can’t wait for the next one!

By: Bryce Beattie

Bryce Beattie — Mon, 14 Jan 2008 14:12:04 +0000

Typos fixed. Thanks, you guys.

By: Evil Kiwi

Evil Kiwi — Sun, 13 Jan 2008 21:57:06 +0000

‘A vain was throbbing on his bald head. �You know we have limited resources, and still, you�ll just let anyone in off the street?�’

Uh, I think that’d be vein.

Anyway, great work!

By: Glenn

Glenn — Sun, 13 Jan 2008 15:27:23 +0000

Bryce,
I hope that you did get that “quality” time with your son. Anyhow, I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed this last chapter. Ok, it might be a soap opera hotel, but it sure seems to be better then the last place he was in. Thanks and keep up the good work!

By: Rob Smith

Rob Smith — Sat, 12 Jan 2008 17:50:02 +0000

“By that third day, we rounded up ad many of the neighbors as possible”

i think you mean ‘as’ not ‘ad’

anyways great - Richard sounds like a dick and im sure him and lily cause Corbin some more trouble soon …