Comments on: Chapter 39 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/01/18/chapter-39/ Action Adventure Fiction and Other Stuff from Bryce Beattie Wed, 28 Jul 2010 23:31:45 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: DarcKnyt http://www.storyhack.com/2008/01/18/chapter-39/comment-page-1/#comment-2243 DarcKnyt Wed, 23 Jan 2008 07:54:22 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/01/18/chapter-39/#comment-2243 Hey, Bryce, m'man -- I wanted to TAG you for an award, buddy. Check out <a href="http://darcknyt.wordpress.com/2008/01/23/ive-received-my-first-blogwriting-award/">this post</a> for more information. God bless, buddy! Hey, Bryce, m’man — I wanted to TAG you for an award, buddy.

Check out this post for more information.

God bless, buddy!

]]> By: Bryce Beattie http://www.storyhack.com/2008/01/18/chapter-39/comment-page-1/#comment-2241 Bryce Beattie Tue, 22 Jan 2008 03:23:39 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/01/18/chapter-39/#comment-2241 Well, you know, I thought to myself, "what would be cooler than just zombies?" and then it hit me - zombies AND pirates. Thanks for pointing those out everybody. I figure Corbin deserved a little rest, considering what he's about to go through... Well, you know, I thought to myself, “what would be cooler than just zombies?” and then it hit me – zombies AND pirates.

Thanks for pointing those out everybody.

I figure Corbin deserved a little rest, considering what he’s about to go through…

]]> By: Jake http://www.storyhack.com/2008/01/18/chapter-39/comment-page-1/#comment-2237 Jake Sun, 20 Jan 2008 18:20:49 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/01/18/chapter-39/#comment-2237 sup bryce, great chapter. I have been reading oasis for a while now and just wanted to congradulate you on a job well done.i cant't wait to find out whos at the door. sup bryce, great chapter. I have been reading oasis for a while now and just wanted to congradulate you on a job well done.i cant’t wait to find out whos at the door.

]]> By: DamJam http://www.storyhack.com/2008/01/18/chapter-39/comment-page-1/#comment-2233 DamJam Sun, 20 Jan 2008 08:30:55 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/01/18/chapter-39/#comment-2233 Hey bryce, good chapter! found a typo

“Look, Corbin. Linda told me what happened back at YOU apartment building.

shouldent it be

“Look, Corbin. Linda told me what happened back at YOUR apartment building.

]]> By: DarcKnyt http://www.storyhack.com/2008/01/18/chapter-39/comment-page-1/#comment-2232 DarcKnyt Sat, 19 Jan 2008 23:54:37 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/01/18/chapter-39/#comment-2232 Ah, another moment of peace. All the while, the reader knows this can't last. It never does. Either Corbin will screw up with his hot head and fast tongue, or Richard and the Gang of Four will be up to something sinister, or Lily's going to create a problem, or ... ... or, we'll just have to find out next week. :) Nice job, bud. I didn't notice any typos not already brought to your attention. Take care, and I can't wait for next Friday! Ah, another moment of peace. All the while, the reader knows this can’t last. It never does. Either Corbin will screw up with his hot head and fast tongue, or Richard and the Gang of Four will be up to something sinister, or Lily’s going to create a problem, or …

… or, we’ll just have to find out next week. :)

Nice job, bud. I didn’t notice any typos not already brought to your attention.

Take care, and I can’t wait for next Friday!

]]> By: Glenn http://www.storyhack.com/2008/01/18/chapter-39/comment-page-1/#comment-2229 Glenn Sat, 19 Jan 2008 16:04:18 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/01/18/chapter-39/#comment-2229 Good chapter Bryce! Can't wait to find out who is at the door. Hope you don't let those nasty lawyers get the better of Corbin and Samson. Good chapter Bryce! Can’t wait to find out who is at the door. Hope you don’t let those nasty lawyers get the better of Corbin and Samson.

]]> By: Rob http://www.storyhack.com/2008/01/18/chapter-39/comment-page-1/#comment-2228 Rob Sat, 19 Jan 2008 13:44:58 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/01/18/chapter-39/#comment-2228 i noticed : To me surprise, a nearby voice called out “Just a minute.”

i think you mean “my”

unless as Dylan says he thinks he is a Pirate

]]> By: dylan http://www.storyhack.com/2008/01/18/chapter-39/comment-page-1/#comment-2225 dylan Sat, 19 Jan 2008 00:48:38 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/01/18/chapter-39/#comment-2225 and you put to me suprise well maybe he is a pirate and you put to me suprise well maybe he is a pirate

]]> By: dylan http://www.storyhack.com/2008/01/18/chapter-39/comment-page-1/#comment-2224 dylan Sat, 19 Jan 2008 00:46:12 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/01/18/chapter-39/#comment-2224 you apartment building, i think its your so i just wanted to point it out you apartment building, i think its your so i just wanted to point it out

]]> By: Taehl http://www.storyhack.com/2008/01/18/chapter-39/comment-page-1/#comment-2223 Taehl Fri, 18 Jan 2008 22:23:51 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/01/18/chapter-39/#comment-2223 Is there no safe haven for Corbin? Even though you say when the next part of the story will be out, I still check daily ;) Is there no safe haven for Corbin? Even though you say when the next part of the story will be out, I still check daily ;)

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