Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 40

By: Stephanie

Stephanie — Fri, 01 Feb 2008 13:51:07 +0000

So what time on Friday can we expect the next chapter, I’m dying to know?!

By: Bryce Beattie

Bryce Beattie — Fri, 01 Feb 2008 04:59:13 +0000

Thanks again, you all. Someday I’ll learn to use the spellchecker.

By: Taehl

Taehl — Fri, 01 Feb 2008 01:10:20 +0000

Damn, I thought I would be the first to catch “coulf”. Ah well, maybe I’ll get one someday.

My personal views on courtship are irrelevant here, but I will comment that it’d be horrendously inconvenient to be pregnant in the middle of a zombie outbreak, and hopefully for Lily’s sake they plan accordingly.

I like how you don’t neglect the “survival” to depict the “horror”. Zombies are great, but the story gets much better when you also have to worry about food, water, disease, survivors being malignant…

By: Amy K

Amy K — Tue, 29 Jan 2008 11:34:32 +0000

One typo so far - I tried to come up with a good excuse, but the only thing I coulf (could) think up was, �I�m not sure.�

Love the story, keep it coming!

By: Bart

Bart — Sun, 27 Jan 2008 04:19:22 +0000

I liked the description, “Firm body, perky attitude, nice hair.” It leads the mind without being explicitly dirty.

On a personal note however, I think a ‘don’t ask don’t tell policy might is be acceptable here’, except for the fact that zombies are notorious with just going with the flow.

By: DarcKnyt

DarcKnyt — Sat, 26 Jan 2008 23:44:35 +0000

He’d better hope she doesn’t know where her parents are! If her dad gets wind of this, the ZOMBIES will be the last thing on Corbin’s mind!

Nice job with this; sensuality without graphic depiction. Well played, sir; a sign of a strong author. Great work!