Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 44 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/02/22/oasis-chapter-44/ Action Adventure Fiction and Other Stuff from Bryce Beattie Wed, 28 Jul 2010 23:31:45 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: n. nunez http://www.storyhack.com/2008/02/22/oasis-chapter-44/comment-page-1/#comment-5146 n. nunez Wed, 25 Mar 2009 04:39:45 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/02/22/oasis-chapter-44/#comment-5146 Well-paced and suspenseful...a fine read Well-paced and suspenseful…a fine read

]]> By: DarcKnyt http://www.storyhack.com/2008/02/22/oasis-chapter-44/comment-page-1/#comment-2814 DarcKnyt Fri, 22 Feb 2008 17:19:56 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/02/22/oasis-chapter-44/#comment-2814 Woo! JUSTICE, at LAST! Nice to see things work Corbin's way for a change. And the two biggest guys in the bar are squaring off! I'm putting my money on the street-hardened Samson, who seems to have pushed more than pencils and petty criminals in his life, over the gym-inflated but untested lawyer (who would rather sue than fight so has no scuffling experience to draw on). Great job here, Bryce. Things looking up for Corbin for once gives the reader a nice chance to "hoorah" for him and gather themselves for the less petty, more pressing matters of the living dead coming to eat the survivors. Bravo! More, author, more! Woo! JUSTICE, at LAST! Nice to see things work Corbin’s way for a change. And the two biggest guys in the bar are squaring off! I’m putting my money on the street-hardened Samson, who seems to have pushed more than pencils and petty criminals in his life, over the gym-inflated but untested lawyer (who would rather sue than fight so has no scuffling experience to draw on).

Great job here, Bryce. Things looking up for Corbin for once gives the reader a nice chance to “hoorah” for him and gather themselves for the less petty, more pressing matters of the living dead coming to eat the survivors.

Bravo! More, author, more!

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