Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 45 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/02/29/oasis-chapter-45/ Action Adventure Fiction Fri, 25 Jul 2008 16:01:05 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Ricky http://www.storyhack.com/2008/02/29/oasis-chapter-45/#comment-2956 Ricky Tue, 04 Mar 2008 02:40:37 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/02/29/oasis-chapter-45/#comment-2956 Oasis is becoming ever more popular isn't it Bryce? I've told a bunch of people at school about it, hopefully they start to read it soon. Great job on updating the site, by the end of the stroy, you'll probably have a bunch of followers. Oasis is becoming ever more popular isn’t it Bryce? I’ve told a bunch of people at school about it, hopefully they start to read it soon. Great job on updating the site, by the end of the stroy, you’ll probably have a bunch of followers.

]]> By: Glen http://www.storyhack.com/2008/02/29/oasis-chapter-45/#comment-2949 Glen Sun, 02 Mar 2008 21:32:03 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/02/29/oasis-chapter-45/#comment-2949 Bryce, Excellent chapter. I hope that Richard gets eaten by the biggest ugliest zombie there is out there. Thanks for the chapter and keep up the great work! Bryce,
Excellent chapter. I hope that Richard gets eaten by the biggest ugliest zombie there is out there. Thanks for the chapter and keep up the great work!

]]> By: Rob http://www.storyhack.com/2008/02/29/oasis-chapter-45/#comment-2946 Rob Sun, 02 Mar 2008 02:44:06 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/02/29/oasis-chapter-45/#comment-2946 BTW bryce - I told Slogger and Osvajac about Oasis ;) BTW bryce - I told Slogger and Osvajac about Oasis ;)

]]> By: Osvajac http://www.storyhack.com/2008/02/29/oasis-chapter-45/#comment-2944 Osvajac Sat, 01 Mar 2008 23:15:15 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/02/29/oasis-chapter-45/#comment-2944 Its for Bryce to decide...just hope we discover that soon Great Chapter keep em coming Its for Bryce to decide…just hope we discover that soon

Great Chapter keep em coming

]]> By: Slogger http://www.storyhack.com/2008/02/29/oasis-chapter-45/#comment-2941 Slogger Sat, 01 Mar 2008 18:44:37 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/02/29/oasis-chapter-45/#comment-2941 To DarcKnyt who said "What about the terrorists? Did they manage this in other cities too, or is Oasis alone in it’s predicament?" - I think the terrorists where trying to use Oasis as a "Small Scale Test" of sorts. To DarcKnyt who said “What about the terrorists? Did they manage this in other cities too, or is Oasis alone in it’s predicament?” - I think the terrorists where trying to use Oasis as a “Small Scale Test” of sorts.

]]> By: Rob http://www.storyhack.com/2008/02/29/oasis-chapter-45/#comment-2940 Rob Sat, 01 Mar 2008 15:42:38 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/02/29/oasis-chapter-45/#comment-2940 Grr i hate Richard personally but another great installment, if a little bit short.... Anyway Byrce, is there any chance i could send you a bit of a story that im writing, i'd like your opinion as you are a great inspiration to me Yes it's about Zombies, but i didn't steal any of your ideas ! It's in a completely different setting in fact So, would you ? Grr i hate Richard personally

but another great installment, if a little bit short….

Anyway Byrce, is there any chance i could send you a bit of a story that im writing, i’d like your opinion as you are a great inspiration to me

Yes it’s about Zombies, but i didn’t steal any of your ideas ! It’s in a completely different setting in fact

So, would you ?

]]> By: Taehl http://www.storyhack.com/2008/02/29/oasis-chapter-45/#comment-2938 Taehl Sat, 01 Mar 2008 12:50:17 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/02/29/oasis-chapter-45/#comment-2938 As always, great stuff. Moving right along at a perfect pace. I sure hope those slimy lawyers don't slip away in the commotion. As always, great stuff. Moving right along at a perfect pace. I sure hope those slimy lawyers don’t slip away in the commotion.

]]> By: DarcKnyt http://www.storyhack.com/2008/02/29/oasis-chapter-45/#comment-2935 DarcKnyt Sat, 01 Mar 2008 05:30:22 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/02/29/oasis-chapter-45/#comment-2935 Bryce, great entry, bud! I love that the story's plot, not just scenes and setting, are moving forward with this one. What's the deal with the dead hunting in packs now? How does that effect the chances of the survivors? What is the military doing, why isn't the guv'mint helping? What's their agenda? What about the terrorists? Did they manage this in other cities too, or is Oasis alone in it's predicament? All the questions as the plot bubbles and thickens. Great job. One tiny typo (that I found, anyway). You can fix by adding an ellipsis to the opening of the sentence in question, or add the word "they" after the "Don't". Your call. :) <i>A few more chimed in. “<b>Don’t even care</b> that we’re dying?”</i> Great job again, bud, and I hope you're doing okay. Bryce, great entry, bud! I love that the story’s plot, not just scenes and setting, are moving forward with this one. What’s the deal with the dead hunting in packs now? How does that effect the chances of the survivors? What is the military doing, why isn’t the guv’mint helping? What’s their agenda? What about the terrorists? Did they manage this in other cities too, or is Oasis alone in it’s predicament?

All the questions as the plot bubbles and thickens. Great job.

One tiny typo (that I found, anyway). You can fix by adding an ellipsis to the opening of the sentence in question, or add the word “they” after the “Don’t”. Your call. :)

A few more chimed in. “Don’t even care that we’re dying?”

Great job again, bud, and I hope you’re doing okay.

]]> By: Bryce Beattie http://www.storyhack.com/2008/02/29/oasis-chapter-45/#comment-2934 Bryce Beattie Sat, 01 Mar 2008 05:07:04 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/02/29/oasis-chapter-45/#comment-2934 Just testing to see if this works. Just testing to see if this works.

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