Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 45

By: Husker Mike

Husker Mike — Sun, 28 Jun 2009 04:40:25 +0000

According to Max Brooks’ Zombie Survival Guide, the thing to do is bring all food and water up to 3rd+ floors and then dismantle the staircases. (grin)

By: Pip

Pip — Sat, 10 Jan 2009 06:09:55 +0000

I don’t know the answers to your most of your questions – need to delete the first “your”

By: Ricky

Ricky — Tue, 04 Mar 2008 02:40:37 +0000

Oasis is becoming ever more popular isn’t it Bryce? I’ve told a bunch of people at school about it, hopefully they start to read it soon. Great job on updating the site, by the end of the stroy, you’ll probably have a bunch of followers.

By: Glen

Glen — Sun, 02 Mar 2008 21:32:03 +0000

Bryce,
Excellent chapter. I hope that Richard gets eaten by the biggest ugliest zombie there is out there. Thanks for the chapter and keep up the great work!

By: Rob

Rob — Sun, 02 Mar 2008 02:44:06 +0000

BTW bryce – I told Slogger and Osvajac about Oasis

By: Osvajac

Osvajac — Sat, 01 Mar 2008 23:15:15 +0000

Its for Bryce to decide…just hope we discover that soon

Great Chapter keep em coming

By: Slogger

Slogger — Sat, 01 Mar 2008 18:44:37 +0000

To DarcKnyt who said “What about the terrorists? Did they manage this in other cities too, or is Oasis alone in it�s predicament?” – I think the terrorists where trying to use Oasis as a “Small Scale Test” of sorts.

By: Rob

Rob — Sat, 01 Mar 2008 15:42:38 +0000

Grr i hate Richard personally

but another great installment, if a little bit short….

Anyway Byrce, is there any chance i could send you a bit of a story that im writing, i’d like your opinion as you are a great inspiration to me

Yes it’s about Zombies, but i didn’t steal any of your ideas ! It’s in a completely different setting in fact

So, would you ?

By: Taehl

Taehl — Sat, 01 Mar 2008 12:50:17 +0000

As always, great stuff. Moving right along at a perfect pace. I sure hope those slimy lawyers don’t slip away in the commotion.

By: DarcKnyt

DarcKnyt — Sat, 01 Mar 2008 05:30:22 +0000

Bryce, great entry, bud! I love that the story’s plot, not just scenes and setting, are moving forward with this one. What’s the deal with the dead hunting in packs now? How does that effect the chances of the survivors? What is the military doing, why isn’t the guv’mint helping? What’s their agenda? What about the terrorists? Did they manage this in other cities too, or is Oasis alone in it’s predicament?

All the questions as the plot bubbles and thickens. Great job.

One tiny typo (that I found, anyway). You can fix by adding an ellipsis to the opening of the sentence in question, or add the word “they” after the “Don’t”. Your call.

A few more chimed in. �Don�t even care that we�re dying?�

Great job again, bud, and I hope you’re doing okay.