Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 46

By: Pip

Pip — Sat, 10 Jan 2009 06:16:21 +0000

What is he doing” – should be What is he doing?

By: Matt

Matt — Sat, 15 Mar 2008 12:59:02 +0000

Man- thanks for writing this! I check every week for a new chapter! Keep up the good work!

By: Bart

Bart — Tue, 11 Mar 2008 07:05:17 +0000

Rest is for unpublishable protagonists!

Bryce – you always have nice action moving the story. Good chapter.

By: Zombit Hobbit

Zombit Hobbit — Tue, 11 Mar 2008 04:04:55 +0000

Poor Corbin, he can never get a break, can he? He really must have been a miserable bastard in a previous life to have had all this bad karma.

Please don’t kill off Samson, that guy is cool. Or I swear to Zombo, the god of zombies, that I will be most upset with you. How upset will I be? I will raise my hands into the air with fists clenched tightly and scream ‘Noooooooooooo!’ in my best Darth Vader voice. Bet you don’t want that on your conscious, do you? Lol.

Keep up the awesome work and I hope you have a great, zombie bight free, trip.

By: Rob

Rob — Sat, 08 Mar 2008 15:29:47 +0000

“A meaty [b]had[/b] plopped on my shoulder and yanked me backwards.”
I think you mean hand

Anyway Great chapter, it got my heart racing !

By: DarcKnyt

DarcKnyt — Sat, 08 Mar 2008 09:45:32 +0000

Bryce, this is an EXCELLENT installment. A tight, well-constructed piece, and it has a lot of nice elements. Personally I’d fight for the hotel. It’s a great location for the group, and worth fighting 30 dead people for, in my humble opinion.

Corbin’s going to collapse soon. A human body can only tolerate so much without rest. A great entry, bud.

Enjoy your trip, Godspeed and God bless you all. Safe and happy travels.

By: dylan

dylan — Sat, 08 Mar 2008 06:00:29 +0000

i cant wait a week or more i cant wait a day that was realy good

By: Emerson

Emerson — Sat, 08 Mar 2008 05:07:58 +0000

That guy will never rest. Seriously lol, I pity him. First that idiot Carl, now this… dude give him a break

By: Ricky

Ricky — Sat, 08 Mar 2008 02:44:50 +0000

The poor sap. By the way, second to last line says had instead of hand. Keep up with the awesome work Bud.

By: Glenn

Glenn — Sat, 08 Mar 2008 00:43:20 +0000

Great read Bryce! I knew that MORON Richard was going to let them in, I just knew it. Hopefully the survivors can hold the dead at bay. I hope that you enjoy your trip and though I’m not a patient man, I’ll be semi-patiently awaiting your next installment. Have a great weekend.