Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 50 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/04/11/oasis-chapter-50/ Action Adventure Fiction Fri, 25 Jul 2008 16:19:58 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Slogger http://www.storyhack.com/2008/04/11/oasis-chapter-50/#comment-3335 Slogger Sat, 12 Apr 2008 09:26:21 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/04/11/oasis-chapter-50/#comment-3335 Wow, Just wow, That was great, But something tells me that even more of the brown stuff will hit the fan before they get to the hospital, But just like the guy above, I didnt notice a small typo. "Carl says if we don’t do things this way tonight" That should probably be "his" Wow, Just wow, That was great, But something tells me that even more of the brown stuff will hit the fan before they get to the hospital, But just like the guy above, I didnt notice a small typo.

“Carl says if we don’t do things this way tonight”
That should probably be “his”

]]> By: DarcKnyt http://www.storyhack.com/2008/04/11/oasis-chapter-50/#comment-3322 DarcKnyt Fri, 11 Apr 2008 23:43:46 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/04/11/oasis-chapter-50/#comment-3322 Great chapter, Bryce! I'm on the edge of my seat for another week, man. Great stuff. I did, however, spot one li'l typo: <i>The words of his little rally were not the most inspiring <b>even</b> spoken, but ...</i> That should probably be "ever". Happy weekend, bud, and keep writing! God bless. Great chapter, Bryce! I’m on the edge of my seat for another week, man. Great stuff. I did, however, spot one li’l typo:

The words of his little rally were not the most inspiring even spoken, but …
That should probably be “ever”.

Happy weekend, bud, and keep writing!

God bless.

]]> By: Glenn http://www.storyhack.com/2008/04/11/oasis-chapter-50/#comment-3310 Glenn Fri, 11 Apr 2008 17:16:37 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/04/11/oasis-chapter-50/#comment-3310 TRULY EXCELLENT chapter Bryce. I've got to say that Samson has quickly become one of my favorite characters. Just one question, how about twice a week posts as opposed to your weekly? I know, it's greedy but good grief, you always leave me wanting more! Have a great weekend. Glenn TRULY EXCELLENT chapter Bryce. I’ve got to say that Samson has quickly become one of my favorite characters. Just one question, how about twice a week posts as opposed to your weekly? I know, it’s greedy but good grief, you always leave me wanting more! Have a great weekend.

Glenn

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