Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 53 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/05/02/oasis-chapter-53/ Action Adventure Fiction Fri, 25 Jul 2008 15:57:28 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Rob Smith http://www.storyhack.com/2008/05/02/oasis-chapter-53/#comment-4208 Rob Smith Mon, 05 May 2008 17:25:20 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/05/02/oasis-chapter-53/#comment-4208 Great chapter again Byrce ! Great chapter again Byrce !

]]> By: DarcKnyt http://www.storyhack.com/2008/05/02/oasis-chapter-53/#comment-4205 DarcKnyt Mon, 05 May 2008 14:24:28 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/05/02/oasis-chapter-53/#comment-4205 Brilliant work, Bryce! Bravo! Caught a typo or two for ya, bud: <i>The dead man <b>sprung</b>, colliding with the open door.</i> This should probably be "sprang". <i>I hadn’t had time to see <b>where the where</b> the door was that lead to the rest of store.</i> Just one too many "where"'s here. :) A great entry, BB! Can't wait for next week. Brilliant work, Bryce! Bravo!

Caught a typo or two for ya, bud:

The dead man sprung, colliding with the open door.
This should probably be “sprang”.

I hadn’t had time to see where the where the door was that lead to the rest of store.
Just one too many “where”’s here. :)

A great entry, BB! Can’t wait for next week.

]]> By: Osvajac http://www.storyhack.com/2008/05/02/oasis-chapter-53/#comment-4148 Osvajac Fri, 02 May 2008 19:32:06 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/05/02/oasis-chapter-53/#comment-4148 ahh when is friday coming up i need my next dose of oasis... great chapter ahh when is friday coming up i need my next dose of oasis… great chapter

]]> By: Glenn http://www.storyhack.com/2008/05/02/oasis-chapter-53/#comment-4145 Glenn Fri, 02 May 2008 16:02:58 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/05/02/oasis-chapter-53/#comment-4145 Good grief, the suspense is killing me! Thanks Bryce! Good grief, the suspense is killing me! Thanks Bryce!

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