Comments on: Oasis Chapter 54

By: Bryce Beattie

Bryce Beattie — Thu, 22 May 2008 23:21:21 +0000

I doubt there’s many (If any) of Oasis that would work really well as a short story. I have written short stories before, and I will do so again after I’m done with Oasis. I’ll go check out your site, though.

By: Casey Quinn

Casey Quinn — Thu, 22 May 2008 22:04:52 +0000

Hey i love the story so far! look forward to the next chapter -

You have any part of it that can act really standalone? I run a short story website and would love for you to consider submitting a short story if you could cut out a stand alone chapter - the site is short story library and the url is shortstory.us.com - thanks!

By: Eric

Eric — Mon, 19 May 2008 19:08:11 +0000

Great chapter man. Very detailed. The only thing I didn’t like was the use of one line, really short sentances. Seemed kinda choppy in my opinion. But otherwise, great storyline in the chapter, I’m really enjoying it.

And is it weird that I my mp3 player shuffled to “Fuel” by Metallica when I was reading it?
“Gimme fuel, gimme fire, gimme that which I desire”

By: Jesse

Jesse — Sun, 18 May 2008 18:46:24 +0000

You smell that? That’s the smell of Corbin burning stuff. A very good chapter, indeed.

By: DarcKnyt

DarcKnyt — Fri, 16 May 2008 23:24:28 +0000

“Zombie” indeed! Another fantastic chapter, Bryce. On the edge of my seat until next time for sure!

I only found one little homonymical typo:
I shuttered. That’s “shuddered” — the kind you used is the kind on your windows or in your camera.

Great job!

By: Cory

Cory — Fri, 16 May 2008 20:34:17 +0000

Ah! Gray-matter-splatter, flammable gases, fire, charcoal and guns–my favorite things! How did you know?!

By: Osvajac

Osvajac — Fri, 16 May 2008 17:31:30 +0000

Not an infected man. He’s not a man at all. He has become an “it.” A pile of flesh moving about and spreading disease. He is a zombie. Nothing more

A part of oasis history…another great chapter just keep em coming (hope corbin is fireproof)

By: Nick

Nick — Fri, 16 May 2008 16:56:16 +0000

awesome.
i love/hate the cliffhangers at the end of each chapter, friday never comes fast enough.