Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 57

By: Andres

Andres — Mon, 09 Mar 2009 03:08:14 +0000

Very interesting. Currently writing my own zed-word apocolypse. Found a little typo, though. “I tried to open my eyes but the light shining through my room’s windows felt like knifes in my skull.”

Should be “knives”
Still love the book. Corbin sounds like me, the worst of luck… in life and women!

By: Chad

Chad — Wed, 11 Jun 2008 17:16:55 +0000

yet again…Im waiting for more! Good job!!!

By: Rob Smith

Rob Smith — Sat, 07 Jun 2008 12:14:35 +0000

Wow.

You really know how to play with people’s minds…

I want both Samson and COrbin to survive – but the hopelessness of it all is so depressing !

By: Emerson

Emerson — Fri, 06 Jun 2008 22:09:28 +0000

Awesomeness! What a chapter… never have I read such a wonderful description of what it feels like to have the Infection take over slowly… and then suddenly pulling off.

Oh well, they’re in the hospital now right. I wonder what this new place holds for Corbin.

We still haven’t met any of the military who have had an accident and fallen by mistake off the quarantine wall into Oasis

But anyways, YOU DA MAN! Bestest chapter so far I must say!!

By: Raga6

Raga6 — Fri, 06 Jun 2008 20:59:54 +0000

I don’t know what to say other than the depression isn’t getting better. LOL You’ve written this so well. I want Corbin and Sampson to be okay but I don’t think that’s going to happen. At least they would be leaving legacies that anyone would be proud of. I am eagerly looking forward to the next installment, even if it’s not good news.

By: DarcKnyt

DarcKnyt — Fri, 06 Jun 2008 18:24:06 +0000

Holy. Cow.

Poor Corbin. I think he and I are the same person, sharing experiences. I’ve been curled into a fetal ball begging for death a time or two.

I, for one, am curious about Samson. Poor guy.

I’m excited about what’s coming. And the infection’s effect on Corbin.

Maybe he’s the cure; the natural immunity to the virus from which a serum can be made. How cool would that be?

Hope you feel better, Bryce.

By: Rob

Rob — Fri, 06 Jun 2008 16:07:22 +0000

ZOMG, they chopped off his hand, and now he can kill all the zeds…wait for it…SINGLE HANDEDLY.

By: Glenn

Glenn — Fri, 06 Jun 2008 15:59:05 +0000

Wow, that was just too good!! Nothing like experiencing the disease first hand. Enjoy your weekend Bryce.

P.S. – You can’t kill off Corbin, he’s just been through too much. Thanks again for the excellent read.