Comments on: Oasis: Chapter 60

By: Fred Meyer

Fred Meyer — Mon, 07 Jul 2008 17:40:15 +0000

Excellent work Bryce…….a real Gem of a Novel!! I have been following it’s progress since the 15th chapter and it has kept me checking back every saturday for a weekly dosage of suspense! However, I have found what I believe to be a typo in chapter 60. In the phrase, (“Well, what do you think the military is going to do when they see your friends, whom they think are infected, wondering across the desert?”) I do feel you intended to say wandering instead of wondering. Keep up the good work!! I can’t wait to read the conclusion to this Masterpiece!!!

By: Anons rule

Anons rule — Fri, 04 Jul 2008 22:35:06 +0000

Yuck..the finale STILL not out.

By: Osvajac

Osvajac — Sat, 28 Jun 2008 14:56:49 +0000

Be shure to write some new storyes for us.Im gonna miss Corbin and the company.

As for the independance day,its fate

By: Cory

Cory — Fri, 27 Jun 2008 21:30:37 +0000

I loved this story! I’m gonna miss our little Friday rendezvous when it’s all over!

By: Rob Smith

Rob Smith — Fri, 27 Jun 2008 18:54:39 +0000

The suspense on THAT baby of a chapter !

By: Bryce Beattie

Bryce Beattie — Fri, 27 Jun 2008 16:25:43 +0000

Actually, it wasn’t a plan to end on the 4th- I noticed last night that it just sort of worked out that way.

And thanks for the typo alert.

By: Anons rule

Anons rule — Fri, 27 Jun 2008 16:06:00 +0000

Oh Noes!!! It’s all about to end =O.
Great job thinking of the end date on independence day, gonna be here as soon as the new chapter comes out, great installment

By: DarcKnyt

DarcKnyt — Fri, 27 Jun 2008 15:08:25 +0000

Wow. Heart-stopping. Into a cave with no way out knowing something’s lurking there in wait. And sudden darkness swallows you whole! *Shudder!*

Great job, Bryce. One last cliff-hanger for us, huh? Love it!

I found only one typo in my less-than-thorough once-over:

I put the muzzle got right up next to the crack between door and wall.
I don’t think “got” should be there.

Nice job again, bud. I’m both excited and sad to see it end! And I can’t wait for what’s next!