Comments on: Unfinished… http://www.storyhack.com/2008/07/11/unfinished/ Action Adventure Fiction and Other Stuff from Bryce Beattie Wed, 10 Mar 2010 00:19:31 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Ayarinna http://www.storyhack.com/2008/07/11/unfinished/comment-page-1/#comment-4745 Ayarinna Sat, 30 Aug 2008 18:01:03 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/?p=269#comment-4745 As far as I've read, this storyline is pretty awesome. I like the whole "futuristic" sort of thing. (*is a Sci-Fi addict* :P) Good job! I'm trying to get my book published, also, so I'm going to use the advice on your blog. LuLu appears to be the best... Anyway, I'm talking to myself again. Good luck with your book. =] As far as I’ve read, this storyline is pretty awesome. I like the whole “futuristic” sort of thing. (*is a Sci-Fi addict* :P ) Good job!

I’m trying to get my book published, also, so I’m going to use the advice on your blog. LuLu appears to be the best…

Anyway, I’m talking to myself again. Good luck with your book. =]

]]> By: Rob Smith http://www.storyhack.com/2008/07/11/unfinished/comment-page-1/#comment-4618 Rob Smith Thu, 17 Jul 2008 15:56:30 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/?p=269#comment-4618 Seems like a fairly good plotline ;) Seems like a fairly good plotline ;)

]]> By: DarcKnyt http://www.storyhack.com/2008/07/11/unfinished/comment-page-1/#comment-4558 DarcKnyt Fri, 11 Jul 2008 18:17:15 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/?p=269#comment-4558 Great start. Yeah, it needs polish like you said, but with that buffing it would probably be a real fun ride. With your punchy, pulpy touch to it? Oh yeah. The next <i>Blade Runner</i> maybe. A plot would be a good idea though. ;) Nice job! I'd actually like to see more. Great start. Yeah, it needs polish like you said, but with that buffing it would probably be a real fun ride. With your punchy, pulpy touch to it? Oh yeah. The next Blade Runner maybe.

A plot would be a good idea though. ;)

Nice job! I’d actually like to see more.

]]> By: Anons rule http://www.storyhack.com/2008/07/11/unfinished/comment-page-1/#comment-4557 Anons rule Fri, 11 Jul 2008 13:51:28 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/?p=269#comment-4557 Looks really cool ;P Looks really cool ;P

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