Comments on: The Apocalpse of Blythe – Part 4 http://www.storyhack.com/2008/08/15/the-apocalpse-of-blythe-part-4/ Action Adventure Fiction and Other Stuff from Bryce Beattie Wed, 08 Feb 2012 04:53:53 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Ben Rogers http://www.storyhack.com/2008/08/15/the-apocalpse-of-blythe-part-4/comment-page-1/#comment-4721 Ben Rogers Fri, 22 Aug 2008 13:58:20 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/?p=285#comment-4721 Way to go Bryce! Great short story! I love shorts that can be turned into long stories like TV Pilots and this ranks up there as one the best I've ever read! I really enjoy the character work in this and the pacing was excellent! Ben Way to go Bryce! Great short story! I love shorts that can be turned into long stories like TV Pilots and this ranks up there as one the best I’ve ever read! I really enjoy the character work in this and the pacing was excellent!

Ben

]]> By: Vanessa http://www.storyhack.com/2008/08/15/the-apocalpse-of-blythe-part-4/comment-page-1/#comment-4708 Vanessa Sat, 16 Aug 2008 01:56:48 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/?p=285#comment-4708 Whoa! I wasn't expecting the sword to come to life! But she got him! Woo! *clap* Whoa! I wasn’t expecting the sword to come to life! But she got him! Woo! *clap*

]]> By: Bryce Beattie http://www.storyhack.com/2008/08/15/the-apocalpse-of-blythe-part-4/comment-page-1/#comment-4707 Bryce Beattie Sat, 16 Aug 2008 01:18:10 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/?p=285#comment-4707 Thanks, and I know about the cliffhangers. I can't help myself. Thanks, and I know about the cliffhangers. I can’t help myself.

]]> By: DarcKnyt http://www.storyhack.com/2008/08/15/the-apocalpse-of-blythe-part-4/comment-page-1/#comment-4706 DarcKnyt Fri, 15 Aug 2008 23:44:09 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/?p=285#comment-4706 Wow. GREAT ending ... but another cliff-hanger built-in. Gotta love it. Nice job, Bryce! Bravo! Wow. GREAT ending … but another cliff-hanger built-in. Gotta love it.

Nice job, Bryce! Bravo!

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