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	<title>Comments on: Unfinished Novel &#8211; Chapter 1, part b</title>
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	<description>Action Adventure Fiction and Other Stuff from Bryce Beattie</description>
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		<title>By: Bryce Beattie</title>
		<link>http://www.storyhack.com/2008/08/22/unfinished-novel-chapter-1-part-b/comment-page-1/#comment-4730</link>
		<dc:creator>Bryce Beattie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 23 Aug 2008 22:20:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>AAM did pay for a while, but it looks like they dropped back to no-pay.

If you&#039;re interested, check out their submission page: http://astonishingadventuresmagazine.com.p2.hostingprod.com/?page_id=11</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>AAM did pay for a while, but it looks like they dropped back to no-pay.</p>
<p>If you&#8217;re interested, check out their submission page: <a href="http://astonishingadventuresmagazine.com.p2.hostingprod.com/?page_id=11" >http://astonishingadventuresmagazine.com.p2.hostingprod.com/?page_id=11</a></p>
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		<title>By: DarcKnyt</title>
		<link>http://www.storyhack.com/2008/08/22/unfinished-novel-chapter-1-part-b/comment-page-1/#comment-4725</link>
		<dc:creator>DarcKnyt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 22 Aug 2008 20:24:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ve been kicking the idea of a hard-boiled detective piece too; and setting it in the future.  Great minds must think alike.  Fortunately for me, I think like a great mind every once in a blue moon too.

Interesting concept.  And AAM -- do they pay you for the submissions?  Have any idea what their circulation is?  Just wond&#039;ring.

I just happened to check my reader and there is was; I had no idea you&#039;d JUST posted.  :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve been kicking the idea of a hard-boiled detective piece too; and setting it in the future.  Great minds must think alike.  Fortunately for me, I think like a great mind every once in a blue moon too.</p>
<p>Interesting concept.  And AAM &#8212; do they pay you for the submissions?  Have any idea what their circulation is?  Just wond&#8217;ring.</p>
<p>I just happened to check my reader and there is was; I had no idea you&#8217;d JUST posted.  <img src='http://www.storyhack.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Bryce Beattie</title>
		<link>http://www.storyhack.com/2008/08/22/unfinished-novel-chapter-1-part-b/comment-page-1/#comment-4724</link>
		<dc:creator>Bryce Beattie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 22 Aug 2008 14:04:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>There was no plan at all. Randy and I had been keeping in touch via email after his family moved to Alaska while we were in high school. One day one of us (I can&#039;t remember which) wrote that we should write a novel. We never really discussed plot all that much and never discussed responsibilities, we just emailed the story back and forth, making changes and adding a little each time. It was fun for a while, but fizzled out over time and came to an end when Randy left on an LDS mission.

I may do a futuristic noir story at some time, but I have no plans to resurrect this project. As it ends up, though, I am currently working on a traditional hard-boiled detective story intended for publication in Astonishing Adventures Magazine.

And on another note, you must have been getting on line at the same time I was posting this, it had only been up for a couple of minutes when I got the notification of a comment...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>There was no plan at all. Randy and I had been keeping in touch via email after his family moved to Alaska while we were in high school. One day one of us (I can&#8217;t remember which) wrote that we should write a novel. We never really discussed plot all that much and never discussed responsibilities, we just emailed the story back and forth, making changes and adding a little each time. It was fun for a while, but fizzled out over time and came to an end when Randy left on an LDS mission.</p>
<p>I may do a futuristic noir story at some time, but I have no plans to resurrect this project. As it ends up, though, I am currently working on a traditional hard-boiled detective story intended for publication in Astonishing Adventures Magazine.</p>
<p>And on another note, you must have been getting on line at the same time I was posting this, it had only been up for a couple of minutes when I got the notification of a comment&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: DarcKnyt</title>
		<link>http://www.storyhack.com/2008/08/22/unfinished-novel-chapter-1-part-b/comment-page-1/#comment-4719</link>
		<dc:creator>DarcKnyt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 22 Aug 2008 13:39:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>While I agree you&#039;ve come a long way, I also think this has potential.  Are you interested at all in picking it back up?  I see sort of a &lt;i&gt;Maltese Falcon&lt;/i&gt;, film-noir narration style fitting this so well.  If told in first person it would be amazing.

Just a thought.  How&#039;d you like doing the collab?  What was the division of duties?  How&#039;d you guys decide who was doing what?

Or did you explain all that already and I missed it like the dork I am?  ;)

Good stuff.  Lots of fun.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>While I agree you&#8217;ve come a long way, I also think this has potential.  Are you interested at all in picking it back up?  I see sort of a <i>Maltese Falcon</i>, film-noir narration style fitting this so well.  If told in first person it would be amazing.</p>
<p>Just a thought.  How&#8217;d you like doing the collab?  What was the division of duties?  How&#8217;d you guys decide who was doing what?</p>
<p>Or did you explain all that already and I missed it like the dork I am?  <img src='http://www.storyhack.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>Good stuff.  Lots of fun.</p>
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