Comments on: The last of the unfinished novel… http://www.storyhack.com/2008/09/05/the-last-of-the-unfinished-novel/ Action Adventure Fiction and Other Stuff from Bryce Beattie Wed, 08 Feb 2012 04:53:53 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Randy McNair http://www.storyhack.com/2008/09/05/the-last-of-the-unfinished-novel/comment-page-1/#comment-4767 Randy McNair Sat, 06 Sep 2008 00:17:32 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/?p=296#comment-4767 Wow! That's trip. Weird reading something that you once wrote and wondering what was going to happen next. I think it gets weak towards the end, random and disjointed, but all in all I think its probably THE BEST THING EVER WRITTEN! CHA! Wow! That’s trip. Weird reading something that you once wrote and wondering what was going to happen next. I think it gets weak towards the end, random and disjointed, but all in all I think its probably THE BEST THING EVER WRITTEN! CHA!

]]> By: DarcKnyt http://www.storyhack.com/2008/09/05/the-last-of-the-unfinished-novel/comment-page-1/#comment-4766 DarcKnyt Sat, 06 Sep 2008 00:15:46 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/?p=296#comment-4766 Too bad! Just as the plot thickened like a fine New England chowder! Well done, despite the weaknesses, which you could easily clean up and make this workable. It's not bad at all. I enjoyed it. :) Too bad! Just as the plot thickened like a fine New England chowder!

Well done, despite the weaknesses, which you could easily clean up and make this workable. It’s not bad at all. I enjoyed it. :)

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