Comments on: The Journey Of St. Laurent, Chapter 1

By: Linda

Linda — Tue, 05 Jul 2011 15:55:45 +0000

are you going to put all these chapters together in a book and publish? I read oasis and want to read this book. but not online. I want to buy it in full so I can read on my kindle, but I did a search on amazon and couldn’t find it.

By: Lyn Thorne-Alder

Lyn Thorne-Alder — Mon, 10 May 2010 20:13:52 +0000

Greets!

I found you via Muse’s Success’ “random story,” and I’m already very intrigued. Well done!

By: » The Journey of St. Laurent, Chapter 32 Story Hack

» The Journey of St. Laurent, Chapter 32 Story Hack — Tue, 06 Apr 2010 02:43:15 +0000

[...] reading an online serial pulp novel. If you didn’t start at the beginning, you may want to do so. Chapter 1: Down By The Bay. This serial is the sequel to my first novel, Oasis.As it ends up, getting to see the boss is [...]

By: Chad

Chad — Thu, 01 Oct 2009 01:14:14 +0000

Here we go! I just got to read Chapter 1, and I am now hooked. I can’t wait to read more. More thoughts to follow!

By: Chad

Chad — Wed, 25 Feb 2009 02:57:28 +0000

Bring it on Bryce! I cant wait to read this one! Oasis was awesome!

By: Zombit Hobbit

Zombit Hobbit — Thu, 12 Feb 2009 09:24:56 +0000

Wow, hot damn. This day has been one of the best days in a long time. After nearly a year of no internet + 2 months of being homeless, I finally get internet back (and cable -I am so sick of watching the same DVD’s over and over) and finding out Oasis was finished and the sequal started.

Thank you, Byce and damn good work.

By: Bryce

Bryce — Fri, 30 Jan 2009 06:11:29 +0000

DK – good call. I’ll change that.

By: DarcKnyt

DarcKnyt — Fri, 23 Jan 2009 19:19:44 +0000

Wow, GREAT job on this en medias res opening! Fantastic job again. I’m glad to have another story growing ’round Story Hack again, and I’m looking forward to where this one’s headed!

One tiny note — you used the word “crumpled” twice in the first few sentences; might want to change one of ‘em.

Great job, BB!

By: DarcZombie

DarcZombie — Fri, 23 Jan 2009 15:35:13 +0000

Beautiful! Absolutely wonderful Bryce. It’s gotta feel great to have the first one done and working on the second! I really love how this begins. Can’t wait for more!