Comments on: The Journey Of St. Laurent, Chapter 2 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/02/27/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-2/ Action Adventure Fiction and Other Stuff from Bryce Beattie Wed, 08 Feb 2012 04:53:53 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Linda http://www.storyhack.com/2009/02/27/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-2/comment-page-1/#comment-14320 Linda Mon, 20 Sep 2010 23:48:01 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/02/27/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-2/#comment-14320 This is great! Go Corbin Go! This is great!
Go Corbin Go!

]]> By: Bryce Beattie http://www.storyhack.com/2009/02/27/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-2/comment-page-1/#comment-9176 Bryce Beattie Wed, 30 Dec 2009 20:56:21 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/02/27/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-2/#comment-9176 Beth stayed with her dad who had been injured in the escape from Oasis. Beth stayed with her dad who had been injured in the escape from Oasis.

]]> By: Lousha http://www.storyhack.com/2009/02/27/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-2/comment-page-1/#comment-9130 Lousha Wed, 30 Dec 2009 10:48:34 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/02/27/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-2/#comment-9130 What happened to Beth!!? What happened to Beth!!?

]]> By: Chad http://www.storyhack.com/2009/02/27/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-2/comment-page-1/#comment-6132 Chad Thu, 01 Oct 2009 13:09:26 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/02/27/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-2/#comment-6132 Yep, Im hooked again! Yep, Im hooked again!

]]> By: Rob Smith http://www.storyhack.com/2009/02/27/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-2/comment-page-1/#comment-5393 Rob Smith Sun, 10 May 2009 14:06:50 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/02/27/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-2/#comment-5393 Haven't been here for awhile, so it's nice to see you're still going Byrce! Oh and i noticed this: “Why do trust me with this?” Should there be a 'you' in there? Haven’t been here for awhile, so it’s nice to see you’re still going Byrce!

Oh and i noticed this: “Why do trust me with this?”

Should there be a ‘you’ in there?

]]> By: Bart http://www.storyhack.com/2009/02/27/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-2/comment-page-1/#comment-5090 Bart Thu, 05 Mar 2009 15:25:20 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/02/27/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-2/#comment-5090 Solid chapter, looking forward to more. Solid chapter, looking forward to more.

]]> By: DarcZombie http://www.storyhack.com/2009/02/27/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-2/comment-page-1/#comment-5085 DarcZombie Wed, 04 Mar 2009 17:31:41 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/02/27/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-2/#comment-5085 love it Bryce!! Keep up the great work! love it Bryce!! Keep up the great work!

]]> By: MAX http://www.storyhack.com/2009/02/27/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-2/comment-page-1/#comment-5082 MAX Sat, 28 Feb 2009 22:48:15 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/02/27/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-2/#comment-5082 Great story. Just finished Oasis 1 and the first two chapers of 2. Now I have to be patient till the next chapter.... ugh. Great story. Just finished Oasis 1 and the first two chapers of 2. Now I have to be patient till the next chapter…. ugh.

]]> By: girl http://www.storyhack.com/2009/02/27/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-2/comment-page-1/#comment-5081 girl Sat, 28 Feb 2009 04:21:35 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/02/27/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-2/#comment-5081 yeah! more to read! yeah! more to read!

]]> By: Bryce Beattie http://www.storyhack.com/2009/02/27/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-2/comment-page-1/#comment-5080 Bryce Beattie Fri, 27 Feb 2009 21:15:54 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/02/27/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-2/#comment-5080 Zombit Hobbit - yes indeed, there should be a "be" in there. Zombit Hobbit – yes indeed, there should be a “be” in there.

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