Comments on: The Journey Of St. Laurent, Chapter 9 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/09/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-9/ Action Adventure Fiction and Other Stuff from Bryce Beattie Wed, 28 Jul 2010 23:31:45 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Andrew Herring http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/09/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-9/comment-page-1/#comment-5398 Andrew Herring Wed, 13 May 2009 04:59:41 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/09/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-9/#comment-5398 I've been following your Oasis stories for a while, and it's been quite a trip I must say. When I think something bad's gonna happen, you make it worse than I thought, when I think that something good might happen, something bad happens. And when I think Corbin's going to die, he's been injected with a vaccine without even knowing it! And now he's back on home turf, saving lives. I really hope that I can read more of this soon, it keeps me engaged as a reader. I’ve been following your Oasis stories for a while, and it’s been quite a trip I must say. When I think something bad’s gonna happen, you make it worse than I thought, when I think that something good might happen, something bad happens. And when I think Corbin’s going to die, he’s been injected with a vaccine without even knowing it! And now he’s back on home turf, saving lives.

I really hope that I can read more of this soon, it keeps me engaged as a reader.

]]> By: Jared http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/09/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-9/comment-page-1/#comment-5396 Jared Mon, 11 May 2009 05:55:49 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/09/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-9/#comment-5396 Bryce, I had no Idea you had written a novel. I saw your post on facebook and had to look. I spent the entire day reading Oasis and then these 9 chapters. Bravo bro. I have been captivated and am now your BIGGEST FAN!!!! Can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work Bryce, I had no Idea you had written a novel. I saw your post on facebook and had to look. I spent the entire day reading Oasis and then these 9 chapters. Bravo bro. I have been captivated and am now your BIGGEST FAN!!!! Can’t wait to read more. Keep up the good work

]]> By: Rob Smith http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/09/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-9/comment-page-1/#comment-5395 Rob Smith Sun, 10 May 2009 16:02:08 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/09/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-9/#comment-5395 Absolutely brilliant. This chapter really highlights how insane the story is going. Did notice this though: "Okay, then I was you to kneel..." Is that supposed to be a 'want', and not 'was'? Absolutely brilliant. This chapter really highlights how insane the story is going.

Did notice this though: “Okay, then I was you to kneel…”

Is that supposed to be a ‘want’, and not ‘was’?

]]> By: girl http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/09/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-9/comment-page-1/#comment-5392 girl Sun, 10 May 2009 04:40:57 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/09/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-9/#comment-5392 intense! intense!

]]> By: Sasquatch http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/09/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-9/comment-page-1/#comment-5390 Sasquatch Sun, 10 May 2009 00:55:22 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/09/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-9/#comment-5390 Really good so far dude, I have kept up on the whole series and I really enjoy it. Really good so far dude, I have kept up on the whole series and I really enjoy it.

]]> By: Jordan Johnson http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/09/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-9/comment-page-1/#comment-5388 Jordan Johnson Sat, 09 May 2009 17:19:49 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/09/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-9/#comment-5388 this was awesome.I just got done reading all nine chapters.So far this is a awesome sequel to oasis this was awesome.I just got done reading all nine chapters.So far this is a awesome sequel to oasis

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