Comments on: The Journey Of St. Laurent, Chapter 10 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/15/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-10/ Action Adventure Fiction and Other Stuff from Bryce Beattie Wed, 28 Jul 2010 23:31:45 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Ballsack McNasty http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/15/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-10/comment-page-1/#comment-6214 Ballsack McNasty Wed, 28 Oct 2009 14:16:34 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/15/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-10/#comment-6214 Suicide Silence. -"And what’s your’s?”- No apostraphe in "your's" is necessary. Suicide Silence.

-”And what’s your’s?”- No apostraphe in “your’s” is necessary.

]]> By: john http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/15/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-10/comment-page-1/#comment-5421 john Mon, 25 May 2009 00:20:02 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/15/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-10/#comment-5421 The paragraphs are divided really well and are easy to read The paragraphs are divided really well and are easy to read

]]> By: Rob Smith http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/15/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-10/comment-page-1/#comment-5415 Rob Smith Fri, 22 May 2009 15:50:18 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/15/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-10/#comment-5415 ahh looking back on my earlier comment, I've realised I didn't point out the mistake, you spelt 'Thankfully' as 'Thanksfully' ahh looking back on my earlier comment, I’ve realised I didn’t point out the mistake, you spelt ‘Thankfully’ as ‘Thanksfully’

]]> By: angela http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/15/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-10/comment-page-1/#comment-5411 angela Wed, 20 May 2009 11:14:43 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/15/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-10/#comment-5411 just started reading oasis part 1 2 days ago brillant really liked it..and now oasis 2 good ;) are the zombies coming back? lol thanks just started reading oasis part 1 2 days ago brillant really liked it..and now oasis 2 good ;) are the zombies coming back? lol thanks

]]> By: Jordan Johnson http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/15/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-10/comment-page-1/#comment-5404 Jordan Johnson Sat, 16 May 2009 01:58:53 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/15/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-10/#comment-5404 awesome.Cant wait till to the next chapter! awesome.Cant wait till to the next chapter!

]]> By: Rob Smith http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/15/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-10/comment-page-1/#comment-5403 Rob Smith Fri, 15 May 2009 22:56:07 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/15/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-10/#comment-5403 "It took the three of us pulling together to get the mangled door open. Thanksfully..." Just noticed that one mistake. Other than that, brilliant (: “It took the three of us pulling together to get the mangled door open. Thanksfully…”

Just noticed that one mistake. Other than that, brilliant (:

]]> By: DarcKnyt http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/15/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-10/comment-page-1/#comment-5402 DarcKnyt Fri, 15 May 2009 21:10:38 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/15/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-10/#comment-5402 This would fall into the classification of "a bad day", I think. Nice job, Bryce. This would fall into the classification of “a bad day”, I think.

Nice job, Bryce.

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