Comments on: The Journey of St. Laurent, Chapter 11 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/30/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-11/ Action Adventure Fiction and Other Stuff from Bryce Beattie Wed, 08 Feb 2012 04:53:53 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Randa http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/30/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-11/comment-page-1/#comment-5828 Randa Wed, 29 Jul 2009 20:13:39 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/30/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-11/#comment-5828 So, sorry for doing this 11 chapters in. But, WHERE IS BETH?!?!?!?! So, sorry for doing this 11 chapters in. But, WHERE IS BETH?!?!?!?!

]]> By: Andrew http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/30/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-11/comment-page-1/#comment-5464 Andrew Wed, 03 Jun 2009 23:50:16 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/30/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-11/#comment-5464 This chapter is really good, short, but sweet. I like it. I find it funny that people will argue about stuff like that. But before I get off track, good job. This chapter is really good, short, but sweet. I like it. I find it funny that people will argue about stuff like that. But before I get off track, good job.

]]> By: Darcknyt http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/30/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-11/comment-page-1/#comment-5460 Darcknyt Tue, 02 Jun 2009 23:17:03 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/30/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-11/#comment-5460 Nice job, Bryce. I like this one. Excitement and a bit of humor at the end. Good stuff! Bring on the next piece! Nice job, Bryce. I like this one. Excitement and a bit of humor at the end. Good stuff!

Bring on the next piece!

]]> By: Osvajac http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/30/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-11/comment-page-1/#comment-5459 Osvajac Tue, 02 Jun 2009 20:01:22 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/30/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-11/#comment-5459 lol that may not be a good idea :P... anyway just read the 11 chapters of the sequel. Great work,the story just keeps getting better. anyway i missed a lot,can someone give me the short version what happened with publishing Oasis lol that may not be a good idea :P …

anyway just read the 11 chapters of the sequel. Great work,the story just keeps getting better.

anyway i missed a lot,can someone give me the short version what happened with publishing Oasis

]]> By: girl http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/30/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-11/comment-page-1/#comment-5450 girl Mon, 01 Jun 2009 05:09:01 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/30/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-11/#comment-5450 no cars on the road, a jeep with the top down....I'm thinking the boy can just wee wee out the back of the jeep... Good chapter! no cars on the road, a jeep with the top down….I’m thinking the boy can just wee wee out the back of the jeep…

Good chapter!

]]> By: Jordan Johnson http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/30/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-11/comment-page-1/#comment-5449 Jordan Johnson Sun, 31 May 2009 03:20:09 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/30/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-11/#comment-5449 pretty good but it reminded me alittle of a filler. I've waited like two weeks for this part and it seemed too short. pretty good but it reminded me alittle of a filler. I’ve waited like two weeks for this part and it seemed too short.

]]> By: Sasquatch http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/30/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-11/comment-page-1/#comment-5447 Sasquatch Sat, 30 May 2009 17:37:48 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/05/30/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-11/#comment-5447 Another great segment dude!! The energy is defiantly there, keep up the great work. Another great segment dude!! The energy is defiantly there, keep up the great work.

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