Comments on: The Journey of St. Laurent, Chapter 12

By: RaYmAN x

RaYmAN x — Thu, 12 Aug 2010 00:52:38 +0000

Yo brYCe wHy noT PUt her In LateR AnD haVe A FIght wiTh LonDoN aT tHe WoRST PosiBlE tImE ?

By: Bryce Beattie

Bryce Beattie — Tue, 29 Jun 2010 16:48:09 +0000

Beth stayed with her injured dad. We may never know what happened to her after that. :p

By: Merk

Merk — Mon, 28 Jun 2010 21:30:27 +0000

I have a question.
Where is BETH???

If London and Corbin get romanced, and beth never comes back into the picture..
I’m going to be very, very upset. ha

By: Sasquatch

Sasquatch — Sat, 13 Jun 2009 19:56:22 +0000

Sweet, another good one dude, keep up the good work.

By: RobSmith

RobSmith — Sat, 13 Jun 2009 11:08:10 +0000

Ahh, it WAS worth the wait, I thought we’d lost you Bryce. (:

By: girl

girl — Sat, 13 Jun 2009 03:51:44 +0000

Worth the wait!

By: Darcknyt

Darcknyt — Fri, 12 Jun 2009 15:34:46 +0000

Nice job on this, Bryce. The flow is good, and the story’s moving along nicely. As always you leave the reader wanting more, which is exactly what a chapter should do.

Bravo, and have a great weekend!