Comments on: The Journey of St. Laurent, Chapter 14 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/06/26/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-14/ Action Adventure Fiction and Other Stuff from Bryce Beattie Wed, 08 Feb 2012 04:53:53 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Chad http://www.storyhack.com/2009/06/26/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-14/comment-page-1/#comment-6135 Chad Thu, 01 Oct 2009 15:41:41 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/06/26/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-14/#comment-6135 man o man, I can not stop reading! Good one Bryce!!!! man o man, I can not stop reading! Good one Bryce!!!!

]]> By: Mark Peters http://www.storyhack.com/2009/06/26/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-14/comment-page-1/#comment-5595 Mark Peters Wed, 01 Jul 2009 18:42:49 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/06/26/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-14/#comment-5595 I'm really into this story, Great job so far! I’m really into this story, Great job so far!

]]> By: Ryan http://www.storyhack.com/2009/06/26/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-14/comment-page-1/#comment-5586 Ryan Mon, 29 Jun 2009 17:21:39 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/06/26/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-14/#comment-5586 Another great chapter, keep them coming! Another great chapter, keep them coming!

]]> By: Cory Seeg http://www.storyhack.com/2009/06/26/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-14/comment-page-1/#comment-5583 Cory Seeg Mon, 29 Jun 2009 04:54:21 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/06/26/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-14/#comment-5583 Hah! You've got me hooked again! I'm loving where this story is going. Great work! Hah! You’ve got me hooked again! I’m loving where this story is going. Great work!

]]> By: StephanieG http://www.storyhack.com/2009/06/26/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-14/comment-page-1/#comment-5578 StephanieG Sun, 28 Jun 2009 09:47:32 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/06/26/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-14/#comment-5578 Nice job as always! I now have one more reason to look forward to Fridays! There were a couple of" typos"..........."That with all the rush of air drys you out pretty fast". Should this be: "That, along with the rush of air, dries you out pretty fast"? Also, "I need something that was in the hands an inmate here" should be "........hands of an inmate here". Small items!!!! Can't wait until the next chapter comes out.....keep up the good work! Nice job as always! I now have one more reason to look forward to Fridays!
There were a couple of” typos”………..”That with all the rush of air drys you out pretty fast”. Should this be: “That, along with the rush of air, dries you out pretty fast”?
Also, “I need something that was in the hands an inmate here” should be “……..hands of an inmate here”.
Small items!!!! Can’t wait until the next chapter comes out…..keep up the good work!

]]> By: DarcKnyt http://www.storyhack.com/2009/06/26/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-14/comment-page-1/#comment-5572 DarcKnyt Sat, 27 Jun 2009 03:02:13 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/06/26/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-14/#comment-5572 Nice job on this, bud! I like the flow, and the taut ending was well done. Questions about the government were nicely worked in, too. Looking forward to next installment! Nice job on this, bud! I like the flow, and the taut ending was well done. Questions about the government were nicely worked in, too.

Looking forward to next installment!

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