Comments on: The Journey Of St. Laurent, Chapter 15 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/07/11/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-15/ Action Adventure Fiction and Other Stuff from Bryce Beattie Wed, 08 Feb 2012 04:53:53 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: DarcZombie http://www.storyhack.com/2009/07/11/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-15/comment-page-1/#comment-5712 DarcZombie Thu, 16 Jul 2009 16:22:55 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/07/11/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-15/#comment-5712 Love it Bryce...As usually I'm in awe of your work. I love where your heading and can't wait to read more my friend! Love it Bryce…As usually I’m in awe of your work. I love where your heading and can’t wait to read more my friend!

]]> By: Ryan http://www.storyhack.com/2009/07/11/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-15/comment-page-1/#comment-5700 Ryan Tue, 14 Jul 2009 16:18:29 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/07/11/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-15/#comment-5700 More please! More please!

]]> By: cyclops http://www.storyhack.com/2009/07/11/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-15/comment-page-1/#comment-5690 cyclops Mon, 13 Jul 2009 15:20:43 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/07/11/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-15/#comment-5690 hey, really lovin' the series-been reading since oasis. i'm looking forward to finding out where this story line is headed. also, found a typo, near the end it says 'where to we go from here?' shouldn't it be 'where *do* we go from here?' other than that, keep up the good work. hey, really lovin’ the series-been reading since oasis.
i’m looking forward to finding out where this story line is headed.

also, found a typo, near the end
it says
‘where to we go from here?’
shouldn’t it be ‘where *do* we go from here?’

other than that, keep up the good work.

]]> By: girl http://www.storyhack.com/2009/07/11/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-15/comment-page-1/#comment-5676 girl Sun, 12 Jul 2009 04:21:50 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/07/11/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-15/#comment-5676 oooooo...good....I think poor Corbin is about to get a few surprises in that jail. oooooo…good….I think poor Corbin is about to get a few surprises in that jail.

]]> By: DarcKnyt http://www.storyhack.com/2009/07/11/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-15/comment-page-1/#comment-5675 DarcKnyt Sat, 11 Jul 2009 23:07:51 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/07/11/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-15/#comment-5675 It's a mass exodus ... of the most unpleasant people. Everybody's somebody's boy; even the hardened criminals. This is going to be an interesting moral choice. Although making it at gunpoint is probably easier. :) Found a typo: <i>Each one was labeled- "cell 1 monitor 1", "cell 1 monitor 2", "cell 2 monitor 1", and so on with two <b>angels</b> for every cell.</i> I suppose there can be angels in jail cells, but I'm pretty sure you meant "angles" here. ;) It’s a mass exodus … of the most unpleasant people.

Everybody’s somebody’s boy; even the hardened criminals. This is going to be an interesting moral choice. Although making it at gunpoint is probably easier. :)

Found a typo:
Each one was labeled- “cell 1 monitor 1″, “cell 1 monitor 2″, “cell 2 monitor 1″, and so on with two angels for every cell.
I suppose there can be angels in jail cells, but I’m pretty sure you meant “angles” here. ;)

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