Comments on: The Journey of St. Laurent, Chapter 17 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/08/01/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-17/ Action Adventure Fiction and Other Stuff from Bryce Beattie Wed, 08 Feb 2012 04:53:53 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Chad http://www.storyhack.com/2009/08/01/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-17/comment-page-1/#comment-6136 Chad Thu, 01 Oct 2009 15:50:43 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/08/01/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-17/#comment-6136 Yet again Bryce, another great story, Im ready for more! Yet again Bryce, another great story, Im ready for more!

]]> By: Georgene http://www.storyhack.com/2009/08/01/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-17/comment-page-1/#comment-5867 Georgene Wed, 05 Aug 2009 22:32:04 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/08/01/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-17/#comment-5867 Not nearly long enough! I want MORE, MORE, I tell you, More! Talk about adrenalin rush! Not nearly long enough! I want MORE, MORE, I tell you, More! Talk about adrenalin rush!

]]> By: Jordan Johnson http://www.storyhack.com/2009/08/01/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-17/comment-page-1/#comment-5860 Jordan Johnson Mon, 03 Aug 2009 18:41:33 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/08/01/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-17/#comment-5860 another great chapter. I didn't see any typos or errors. Can't wait for the next chapter! another great chapter. I didn’t see any typos or errors. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

]]> By: Sasquatch http://www.storyhack.com/2009/08/01/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-17/comment-page-1/#comment-5854 Sasquatch Mon, 03 Aug 2009 05:29:31 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/08/01/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-17/#comment-5854 Another great chapter man! Another great chapter man!

]]> By: RobSmith http://www.storyhack.com/2009/08/01/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-17/comment-page-1/#comment-5849 RobSmith Sun, 02 Aug 2009 16:41:19 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/08/01/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-17/#comment-5849 Ahh, even though I know that Samir gets caught, I still felt pretty gripped by the chapter. Good work Bryce (: Ahh, even though I know that Samir gets caught, I still felt pretty gripped by the chapter.

Good work Bryce (:

]]> By: Toothy http://www.storyhack.com/2009/08/01/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-17/comment-page-1/#comment-5848 Toothy Sun, 02 Aug 2009 16:40:07 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/08/01/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-17/#comment-5848 (that doesn't mean it wasn't a great chapter by the way) (that doesn’t mean it wasn’t a great chapter by the way)

]]> By: Toothy http://www.storyhack.com/2009/08/01/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-17/comment-page-1/#comment-5847 Toothy Sun, 02 Aug 2009 16:39:22 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/08/01/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-17/#comment-5847 Somehow I feel relaxed because I know Samir will get caught. There were always shocking surprises until now and I'm not sure why, but I love them and hate them at the same time. Please shock me :) Somehow I feel relaxed because I know Samir will get caught. There were always shocking surprises until now and I’m not sure why, but I love them and hate them at the same time. Please shock me :)

]]> By: DarcKnyt http://www.storyhack.com/2009/08/01/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-17/comment-page-1/#comment-5846 DarcKnyt Sun, 02 Aug 2009 14:55:52 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/08/01/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-17/#comment-5846 Awesome job, bud. This one really screams. Moves fast, works well. I didn't spot any typos or anything. Very clean. Job well done! Awesome job, bud. This one really screams. Moves fast, works well. I didn’t spot any typos or anything. Very clean. Job well done!

]]> By: Glenn http://www.storyhack.com/2009/08/01/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-17/comment-page-1/#comment-5845 Glenn Sun, 02 Aug 2009 13:51:21 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/08/01/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-17/#comment-5845 Great chapter Bryce!! Your story just keeps getting better and better! Keep up the great work! Great chapter Bryce!! Your story just keeps getting better and better! Keep up the great work!

]]> By: girl http://www.storyhack.com/2009/08/01/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-17/comment-page-1/#comment-5841 girl Sun, 02 Aug 2009 03:35:59 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/08/01/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-17/#comment-5841 Loved it! Loved it!

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