Comments on: The Journey of St. Laurent, Chapter 22

By: Iklan Rumah

Iklan Rumah — Tue, 01 Dec 2009 02:36:43 +0000

Well done! good work. can’t wait for the next chapter. this is a good one.

By: GreenEyedMami

GreenEyedMami — Sat, 14 Nov 2009 20:24:02 +0000

WOW!!!! I love love LOVE ur work!! ^_^ very addicting story, but when is the new chapter coming????

By: water dispenser

water dispenser — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 05:47:02 +0000

I’m new to the Oasis world but once I found the site I couldn’t stop reading.

By: Sleepin

Sleepin — Fri, 23 Oct 2009 06:10:11 +0000

Sweet!

By: Bryce Beattie

Bryce Beattie — Thu, 22 Oct 2009 12:58:47 +0000

Sorry, yes, I’m writing more. Things have just been hectic around my place.

By: Sleepin

Sleepin — Thu, 22 Oct 2009 06:22:08 +0000

Are you ever gonna write more or what?

By: Georgene

Georgene — Mon, 19 Oct 2009 15:49:19 +0000

Hi Bryce,
Love the chapters so far…but will this guy ever get back on track…

Found a few edits:
Think you left out the word, bring, here:
“Great, it in and close the door. What’s your name again?”
and also near the end:
Think the word should be done and not dome:
“In fact, you two should go until we get dome…”

Can’t wait for the next installment!
Georgene

By: Vanessa (DarcsFalcon)

Vanessa (DarcsFalcon) — Sat, 10 Oct 2009 16:51:58 +0000

Oh, that sleep thing! I’ll say a prayer she’s not a night owl like my youngest, or myself.

Have you posted any recent pics anywhere? I bet she’s changed so much since she was born!

By: Kizzy

Kizzy — Sat, 10 Oct 2009 11:10:08 +0000

Hi, I’m new to the Oasis world but once I found the site I couldn’t stop reading. Congratulations on the new baby, she’s beautiful! Another fine chapter despite the sleepness nights you must be having. All the best to the three of you, keep up the good work!

By: girl

girl — Sat, 10 Oct 2009 05:06:24 +0000

I felt like I was right in there giving birth with Jenna. Very descriptive – loved it!