Comments on: The Journey Of St. Laurent, Chapter 23

By: Toothy

Toothy — Fri, 04 Dec 2009 17:35:04 +0000

Exciting! Can’t wait

By: Bryce Beattie

Bryce Beattie — Fri, 04 Dec 2009 05:34:03 +0000

That would ruin the fun if I told, now wouldn’t it? :p

By: Fadly

Fadly — Fri, 04 Dec 2009 04:32:11 +0000

great story thus far. fan of oasis and now hooked to st laurent. by the way, will there be any zombie outbreak? I’m guessing if there are, it will be in big magnitude. because of the virus vial is outside of oasis wall. thanks for the story. i’m a big fan of your story.

By: Satha

Satha — Thu, 26 Nov 2009 17:00:42 +0000

Wow, what an interesting story! I’ll have to come back later and read from the beginning so it makes more sense. =)

By: Silk trousers

Silk trousers — Tue, 24 Nov 2009 09:48:33 +0000

I like your imagination power to make such story. Feel nice to read this.

By: Jordan Johnson

Jordan Johnson — Tue, 17 Nov 2009 22:27:40 +0000

Nice One Bryce! Worth the wait. Ohh lets see now what kind of trouble Corbin gets into now.

By: Ballsack McNasty

Ballsack McNasty — Tue, 17 Nov 2009 14:19:57 +0000

Welcome back, Mr. Beattie. A few typing “errors” I found.

-”Who, the military? Because I don’t know what’s happened to local law enforcement, but they’re not able to anyth-”- I see that he was about to say “but they’re not able to anything.” I don’t know if that was intentional.

-I went over to Nina. “Look, I’m really sorry. The phone call I just made might mean they come looking.”- I think you may have meant THEY’LL come looking.

Keep it up.

By: girl

girl — Tue, 17 Nov 2009 05:24:44 +0000

That was EXCITING! Welcome back!

By: a flyin hobo

a flyin hobo — Tue, 17 Nov 2009 01:56:16 +0000

Woohoo! St. Laurent is back! One night over the summer, I was looking for a good Zombie read, and came across Oasis, after reading a couple chapters, I was hooked. I read the whole book in one shot, sure I stayed up ’til 6 in the morning, but the darkness made it that much better to read. The next day, I caught up on St. Laurent. Ever since then, I’ve been checking back (almost) daily for new chapters. Heck, you’ve even inspired me to try writing a zombie story of my own!

P.S. Not sure if this was a typo or just voice, but Jex says, “Head East, and find a way to listen (to?) my special show tonight on a shortwave.”

By: DarcKnyt

DarcKnyt — Mon, 16 Nov 2009 20:14:24 +0000

Well! That’s certainly back with a vengeance! I must admit, this action-packed piece was well worth the wait.

And I didn’t catch a single typo anywhere. How cool is that?

Great piece, Bryce!