Comments on: The Journey of St. Laurent, Chapter 25

By: Jordan

Jordan — Fri, 30 Apr 2010 18:18:35 +0000

The UFO’s angry lights lit ground outside the shadow of the overpass. ^Just a thought, but shouldn’t this be “lights lit the ground”?

By: Josh

Josh — Tue, 22 Dec 2009 06:17:25 +0000

Oh sweet as, understandable with xmas and the hectics of buying presents and what not. Man I got to tell my mate about this even though Aliens scare him, he watched E.T when he was 5 and it scared the crap out of him and that started it, Great chapter btw keep up the good work.

By: Bryce Beattie

Bryce Beattie — Mon, 21 Dec 2009 16:32:33 +0000

I usually post chapters on Fridays. I missed this last Friday, but I’ll post a chapter sometime this week before Christmas. Then next week, I should be back to Fridays.

By: Josh

Josh — Mon, 21 Dec 2009 05:26:58 +0000

Dude that was great!! This reminds me of that t.v show V but this is way better! Whens the next chapter out?

By: Rachel

Rachel — Fri, 18 Dec 2009 00:59:07 +0000

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

By: Jeremy

Jeremy — Wed, 16 Dec 2009 22:15:01 +0000

Excellent work, I can’t wait for the next one.

By: susan houston

susan houston — Wed, 16 Dec 2009 09:51:26 +0000

dude u have to write faster lol love the stories

By: Noah L

Noah L — Mon, 14 Dec 2009 22:25:15 +0000

Hey, I finally caught up! I started Oasis about three weeks ago, and I finally caught up to you! I have to say, this is definitely a very entertaining series you have going, and I’m really looking forward to the next installment.

By: Toothy

Toothy — Sun, 13 Dec 2009 17:04:51 +0000

Good one!

By: Tyler

Tyler — Sun, 13 Dec 2009 03:31:06 +0000

Ill keep this one short:
Noiiiiiice!