Comments on: Book Trailer and Website up for “Journey…” http://www.storyhack.com/2009/12/16/book-trailer-and-website-up-for-journey/ Action Adventure Fiction and Other Stuff from Bryce Beattie Wed, 28 Jul 2010 23:31:45 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Tyler http://www.storyhack.com/2009/12/16/book-trailer-and-website-up-for-journey/comment-page-1/#comment-7838 Tyler Sun, 20 Dec 2009 03:26:17 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/12/16/book-trailer-and-website-up-for-journey/#comment-7838 P.S I hope you got my brother's permission, I'm pretty certain that picture is based on his passport photo! P.S I hope you got my brother’s permission, I’m pretty certain that picture is based on his passport photo!

]]> By: Tyler http://www.storyhack.com/2009/12/16/book-trailer-and-website-up-for-journey/comment-page-1/#comment-7834 Tyler Sun, 20 Dec 2009 03:20:33 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/12/16/book-trailer-and-website-up-for-journey/#comment-7834 They're both really good. Love the biohazard sign on the alien's eye! I wonder if it'd be better with the eyes switched though? Then the biohazard sign would be on the light side and the red dot in the dark. The whole visual interpretation I'd get from that is that the aliens are all seeing, (like the red dot is a piercing gaze through the dark,) I'm in two minds about the size. If it is left larger than the eye you could interpret that this means the virus is over taking intelligent life. Please note, these are just observations and musings.. They’re both really good. Love the biohazard sign on the alien’s eye! I wonder if it’d be better with the eyes switched though? Then the biohazard sign would be on the light side and the red dot in the dark. The whole visual interpretation I’d get from that is that the aliens are all seeing, (like the red dot is a piercing gaze through the dark,) I’m in two minds about the size. If it is left larger than the eye you could interpret that this means the virus is over taking intelligent life.

Please note, these are just observations and musings..

]]> By: DarcsFalcon (Vanessa) http://www.storyhack.com/2009/12/16/book-trailer-and-website-up-for-journey/comment-page-1/#comment-7454 DarcsFalcon (Vanessa) Wed, 16 Dec 2009 21:36:57 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/12/16/book-trailer-and-website-up-for-journey/#comment-7454 I think that book cover is awesome! I love the thing on the eye, the virus sign thingy. That rocks. :) I think that book cover is awesome! I love the thing on the eye, the virus sign thingy. That rocks. :)

]]> By: DarcKnyt http://www.storyhack.com/2009/12/16/book-trailer-and-website-up-for-journey/comment-page-1/#comment-7437 DarcKnyt Wed, 16 Dec 2009 18:22:41 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2009/12/16/book-trailer-and-website-up-for-journey/#comment-7437 The video is very good, Bryce; sharp and nice narration. You didn't stumble or stammer at all. I could've pulled that off. I only have one teeny, tiny suggestion, but it's probably too late at this point: I thought the trailer didn't really get into your book as much as laying out some interesting points in UFOlogy. That's fine, but it's about your book, and should point to the book, IMO. Just a suggestion. And I thought the cover looked good; I'd shrink the biohazard symbol a little to better fit in the eye, but it looks good regardless of my untrained and untalented eye. Bravo on BOTH! The video is very good, Bryce; sharp and nice narration. You didn’t stumble or stammer at all. I could’ve pulled that off. I only have one teeny, tiny suggestion, but it’s probably too late at this point: I thought the trailer didn’t really get into your book as much as laying out some interesting points in UFOlogy. That’s fine, but it’s about your book, and should point to the book, IMO. Just a suggestion.

And I thought the cover looked good; I’d shrink the biohazard symbol a little to better fit in the eye, but it looks good regardless of my untrained and untalented eye.

Bravo on BOTH!

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