Comments on: The Journey of St. Laurent, Chapter 28 http://www.storyhack.com/2010/02/12/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-28/ Action Adventure Fiction and Other Stuff from Bryce Beattie Tue, 07 Sep 2010 02:35:32 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Nicole Carleton http://www.storyhack.com/2010/02/12/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-28/comment-page-1/#comment-10560 Nicole Carleton Thu, 25 Feb 2010 23:46:58 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2010/02/12/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-28/#comment-10560 As it is my understanding that you like free editing, and I want to feel like I'm giving something back to you for all the free entertainment of reading your great novels, I noticed one error: "London was pretty had a pretty light complexion anyway..." I think you meant "London had a pretty light complexion anyway..." I absolutely love your novels! I'm so sad that I must be getting to the current postings. No more instant gratification...now I have to wait like everyone else! :( As it is my understanding that you like free editing, and I want to feel like I’m giving something back to you for all the free entertainment of reading your great novels, I noticed one error:

“London was pretty had a pretty light complexion anyway…”

I think you meant “London had a pretty light complexion anyway…”

I absolutely love your novels! I’m so sad that I must be getting to the current postings. No more instant gratification…now I have to wait like everyone else! :(

]]> By: Nicole Carleton http://www.storyhack.com/2010/02/12/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-28/comment-page-1/#comment-10559 Nicole Carleton Thu, 25 Feb 2010 23:38:30 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2010/02/12/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-28/#comment-10559 Varmint = rodent, or any other pesky critter to those good old southern types! :) Varmint = rodent, or any other pesky critter to those good old southern types! :)

]]> By: paul http://www.storyhack.com/2010/02/12/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-28/comment-page-1/#comment-10484 paul Sat, 20 Feb 2010 04:22:43 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2010/02/12/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-28/#comment-10484 Good chapter but as i am not an american what is varmint. Good chapter but as i am not an american what is varmint.

]]> By: girl http://www.storyhack.com/2010/02/12/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-28/comment-page-1/#comment-10389 girl Sun, 14 Feb 2010 04:54:41 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2010/02/12/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-28/#comment-10389 I wondered how our hero would get out of that one... I wondered how our hero would get out of that one…

]]> By: Glenn http://www.storyhack.com/2010/02/12/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-28/comment-page-1/#comment-10384 Glenn Sat, 13 Feb 2010 21:13:46 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2010/02/12/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-28/#comment-10384 Hey Bryce, Thought old Corbin had bought the farm this time. Well, not really, can't kill the hero off can you? Would make for a pretty short book! Really enjoyed this chapter and like DarcKnyt, it's good to see you back! Can't wait for the next one and as always, keep up the great work!! Glenn Hey Bryce,
Thought old Corbin had bought the farm this time. Well, not really, can’t kill the hero off can you? Would make for a pretty short book! Really enjoyed this chapter and like DarcKnyt, it’s good to see you back! Can’t wait for the next one and as always, keep up the great work!!

Glenn

]]> By: DarcKnyt http://www.storyhack.com/2010/02/12/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-28/comment-page-1/#comment-10376 DarcKnyt Sat, 13 Feb 2010 03:37:11 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2010/02/12/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-28/#comment-10376 Nice stuff, Bryce. I'm glad to see you climb back on that horse, cowboy. :) Hope you're doing great. Nice stuff, Bryce. I’m glad to see you climb back on that horse, cowboy. :)

Hope you’re doing great.

]]> By: Tyler http://www.storyhack.com/2010/02/12/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-28/comment-page-1/#comment-10375 Tyler Sat, 13 Feb 2010 01:46:40 +0000 http://www.storyhack.com/2010/02/12/the-journey-of-st-laurent-chapter-28/#comment-10375 Great chapter mate. I don't know if you noticed but the link isn't up from the chapter list. Just thought you should know :) Great chapter mate. I don’t know if you noticed but the link isn’t up from the chapter list. Just thought you should know :)

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