The Journey of St. Laurent, Chapter 33

Posted in Oasis II, pulp fiction by Bryce Beattie

Author’s note:

For those of you who haven’t read any of the Journey Of St. Laurent before: You are now reading an online serial pulp novel. If you didn’t start at the beginning, you may want to do so. Chapter 1:  Down By The Bay. This serial is the sequel to my first novel, Oasis. As it ends up, getting to see the boss is pretty easy when you’re willing to assault someone. At least, that’s how it worked out for us.

Thanks be to DarcKnyt for his edits last time, and to Maelstrom, Tyler, Chad, Major, Jordan and Mal for stopping by to say hi. If it weren’t for you folk, I probably would have stopped writing this stuff a long time ago.

Chapter 33 – The Wrong Side of the Bed

Another pounding on the door.

When you’ve had time to wake up and get your head screwed on straight you tend to make better decisions. I didn’t have the luxury of thinking the situation through. All I know is that I wasn’t thinking, I was reacting.

In fact, my whole body shook with rage. I felt the blood boils up my neck and my face tense up. Can’t believe I fell for that. I rushed to the door, tore it open and before I could even process who it was, I swung at the person behind it.

A meaty hand deflected my punch. “What the hell…”

I stumbled off balance into the hallway and growled.

The man stepped back and raised his hands. “Slow down there.” It was Rhett, the tank of a man that worked as producer on Jex’s show.

I balled both my fists and advanced swinging.

The man covered like a boxer and just let my wild blows glance off his arms and iron abs.

I lunged forward and pushed with both hands. “Where is it?”

He hopped back a few feet. “Where is what?”

Like he doesn’t know. It was clear he’d had a lot of hand-to-hand training. I was in over my head and in the back of my mind I knew it, but I was too mad to care. I sucked in a couple breaths then dove at him. “Oh, right!”

He caught me in my dive and slammed me against the wall. “I don’t know what the hell is going on, but you’ve got to settle down or you’re going to get-”

“What did you do with it?”

“Corbin!” London burst from the doorway.

Rhett turned his head to the noise.

It was all the distraction I needed. I jerked my right arm free and swung my elbow for his face.

It connected with his mouth.

His head snapped back and he let go of me.

I braced my arms on his wide chest and pushed.

Before I could move him back, he grabbed my shirt with both hands.

I twisted and tried to pull away, but the hallway was too cramped and he was too strong.

He hefted me up an inch or two then flung me in London’s direction. “Calm down! What did I do with what?”

I landed on my butt and immediately tried to get my feet back under me.

London fell to her knees and wrapped her arms around my chest. “Corbin, don’t!”

I scrambled, but couldn’t quite get to my feet.

London jerked me down. “Corbin, stop it.”

Rhett touched his mouth and looked at his hand. No blood. “What the hell is wrong with you?”

I flared my nostrils and gave him my best death stare. “Where’s the virus?”

“What virus?”

“Don’t be stupid. What virus would I have brought with me?”

London tightened her bear hug. “What?”

I pointed the accusing finger. “In the middle of the night, these lying scum opened the door, cut the chain lock and stole the cooler with the virus.”

I heard London suck in a breath through her nose. “They stole it?”

Rhett raised an eyebrow. “Cut the lock?”

“Who else would it have been?”

London held me a moment then loosened her hold. “It’s okay, we’ll get it back, we’ll figure it out. Calm down.”

I stopped pulling against her. How is she the calm one? Doesn’t she get it?

Rhett lowered his guard and scrunched up his forehead. “You mean you had the virus? The virus? As in the one that…”

“That killed Oasis?”

Rhett frowned and turned half away. “No way, I can’t believe that.”

“And you want me to believe that you didn’t know he stole it?”

“If he did, I sure as hell didn’t know about it. But he tells me everything.” Rhett strode by us and examined the cut chain.

“He was the only one who knew we were here, plus he had access to the keys.”

Rhett stared at the hanging half of a chain on the door. I could practically see the gears grinding to a halt at the sign of the break in.

“…said you might be grumpy…” He shook his head. “He just sent me to get you before…”

London let go. “Corbin, it’ll be okay. We’ll find it. Trust me.”

“Before what?”

Rhett took a couple of slow steps back in the hallway. “Alan wouldn’t do… Are you sure?”

“We pretty much went through hell to get it here, and I’m pretty sure it’s gone now.” I rolled onto my knees and faced London.

Our faces were closer than I expected. In fact, if I had turned any faster we would have had a collision kiss.

London looked me straight in the eye. “Trust me.”

My lips moved involuntarily but I couldn’t speak. Why isn’t she furious?

“Trust me.”

What am I supposed to do? I pushed up to my feet, then helped London stand.

The initial flash of rage had passed. I guess plopping to the ground on your butt helps with that. As I got my breathing under control, it occurred to me that Rhett wasn’t acting – he really didn’t know about the virus. But where did that leave me?

Rhett was staring at the hallway wall and appeared to be just as lost in thought as I was.

London grabbed my hand. “Come in the room a sec.”

Rhett snapped his head to the side. “We’ve got to get moving.”

London raised a finger. “Just hold it a minute, captain butch. We’ll be right out.”

“We don’t have much time.”

London tugged me inside the room and kicked the door shut.

Why should we go with him now, anyway? I must have looked as confused as I felt. “What was that?”

“Look, when it’s not summer and the world isn’t ending, I teach third graders.” She let go of me and walked to the other side of the bed.

“What are you talking about?”

She reached down and lifted the corner the mattress with one hand and pulled out something wrapped in a washcloth. “There’s occasionally a kid that likes his neighbor’s folder or pencil or something. He gets a certain look in his eye, and within a day or two he’ll try to steal it. Jex had the same look last night when he looked at the cooler. I figured he knew we had the cooler, but didn’t know what was in it. I had to do something.”

“You didn’t touch-”

“I was careful.” She dropped the washcloth on the bed. One of the two unbroken vials rolled out.

I stared at it. The sight of the vial was almost a relief. But there was a lot still bothering me. The fact that I still had that vial only dealt with half of the problem. If push came to shove, I could still try find a way to infect the aliens. But what about the virus juice that Jex now had? Should I go with Rhett, play nicely, then try to get it back?

One thing was certain, I’d never again be bothered with the question of whether or not to trust Alan Jex – he’d proved himself a snake. But should I still try to work with him in order to fight to good fight?

And what about Rhett? He seemed like a good enough guy, but could I trust anybody? Did Jex leave him out of the virus theft plot because he knew Rhett would object? Or was it just the less people that knew, the better?

The deafening noise of a low flying helicopter snapped me out of my daze – was London saying something?

Rhett pounded on the door. “We’ve got to go.”

Might as well go with him for now. I carefully bundled the vial back up and put it in the Velcroed packet of my cargo pants. “Thanks, London.”

She nodded for the door. “Let’s go get the rest back.”


Keep reading! Chapter 34 is here.

posted on April 16th, 2010

15 Responses to “The Journey of St. Laurent, Chapter 33”

  1. another great one Bryce. I knew Jex couldn’t be trusted and the sound of a helicopter eh? Do I smell a federal raid? heh

  2. Awesome. Corbin, never too intelligent to attack a man bigger and stronger and better trained! I love that about this protag. He thinks most of the time, but then he breaks down.

    This London character’s growing on me too.

    Now, the fun.

    I felt the blood boils up my neck and my face tense up.
    I love your writing, bud. Honest and truly. Aside from the typo (should be singular), I really think you’d benefit by reconstructing sentences like this one, changing just a little bit to invigorate the prose:
    My blood boiled and my face and neck tensed.
    Just the opinion … of a WORKING PRO. (Just kidding, bro. ;) )

    But should I still try to work with him in order to fight to good fight?
    This is prob’ly supposed to be “the”.

    Or was it just the less people that knew, the better?
    This should be “fewer”. It’s awkward the way it is.

    I carefully bundled the vial back up and put it in the Velcroed packet of my cargo pants.
    Okay, this is a nit-pick, but as much bouncing, bounding and tumbling as this guy goes through, this seems like a really, REALLY stupid place to carry a virus as dangerous as the Oasis killer. He saw first hand what it can do. He knows how quickly things go from “Aw, darn” to “OHMYGODHELPME” from watching it. Why would he be so cavalier about this vial? Just sayin’.

    A short, but very sweet entry, bud. I can’t wait for the next one! Things are getting interesting!

  3. Ive defiantly got to agree with darcknyt on this one, might as well just put a bottle of nitroglycerin in your pocket, Corbin really has to start being more cautious soon, otherwise this novels gonna end soon, with him wandering the country eating brains (well I guess there is no brain eating with these zombies, but you get the picture) :P

  4. Fair enough guys, I concede (& had considered that) a hip pocket is not the most secure place. However – where would you put it? You can’t just hold it all the time, you don’t have anything at the moment to put it in. You don’t know if/when you’re coming back or if you’re coming back, so you can’t hide it in the room. Do you just wipe it off and tell London to shove it in her bra?

    In short, he just hasn’t had time to worry about it yet.

  5. I really just tend to lurk and read, but I’ll hop in here because I would have to say that there wouldn’t be any better way to carry it at the moment, especially given the fact that we don’t know the exact size of the vials and therefor can’t make any suggestions as to where else to put them. I say that it’s low-profile and the best option at the moment.

    Besides, I kind of have this faint, morbid hope that the virus will get unleashed on Jex’s crew AND the aliens and everyone is zombified except Corbin and London :P

  6. I have to agree, when you think about it. You have just had an attempt to steal the vials, you would want to keep it as secure and as near to you as possible. In the absence of a steel briefcase handcuffed to your person I reakon a velcro pocket is as good as any, I mean come on guy it isn’t as if he shoved it in a bodily cavity for safekeeping! Sure there is an increased risk and sure Bryce has “poetic license” but still, what reader would believe that Corbs suddenly stumbled upon a pocket sized aircraft black box? Personally I would probably stop reading if things got that god damned riddiculous!

    On a happier note:
    Bryce I love how this has developed and that it is becoming apparent that Corbin can’t even trust those that seem to want to fight with him. Seems much like a real life end of the world scenario, the only person you can truly trust is yourself. Also I like how London is becoming less of a “token female sidekick” and more of an integral part of Corbin’s plans. But then again looking back we always knew this was going to happen with how you wrote about her when Corbin first met her. That and the fact she is a red-head which any man knows are the most firey of the lot!!

    Keep up the good work!
    Faithfully
    Tyler

  7. (Many apologies for any grammatical/spelling mistakes or typos. I have just returned from the pub!! :) )

  8. In the past two days, I have read all of Oasis and all that you have written of St. Laurent. I love the online serial format and am really excited be reading along as you write. Here is one question that has been burning in my mind…what happened to Beth? I though Corbin was in love with her, and now she is gone and he has moved on to London? Unless I am wrong, it has not been THAT long since the events in Oasis….other than that, great job and keep it up!

  9. Beth stayed with her injured dad back at the base. Who knows if we’ll ever see her again… According to her note, she did have feelings for Corbin. And sure he was attracted to Beth. But nothing had a chance to really happen (did they ever even kiss- I can’t remember…) and now Corbin’s been thrown into a new fray.

    Thanks for reading & saying hi.

  10. Stressful situations tend to strengthen emotions and…other things…so I think that it is perfectly normal for Corbin to have a growing attraction to London already. He is young, available, and stressed, and so is she.

  11. Sure, I was just curious…I really like that the women that are forefront in these stories are not cream-puffs. I mean, yeah they have their weaknesses, but they all have core of strength that the situation tends to pull out of them. It is nice to see that in a supporting female character.

  12. Also, I forgot to mention, I absolutly loved the named baseball bats in Oasis! That was too perfect that Beth did that at the end. I was not expecting it and it brought a chuckle to my lips during what was otherwise a very stressful scene. Come on, Chapter 34!

  13. Chapter 34?

  14. I know, I know. I’m a slacker. It’s almost done, though.

  15. You’re not a slacker! Everyone’s entitled to take a break once in a while. You just write too good a story & everyone’s eager for more!
    :)

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