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Wow! A great one! I like that ending, too! Nerve-wracking! I also thought the back-and-forth — while it did add to the nail-bitey-ness of it all — might be a hair long. Just a tad, mind you. Mostly where Corbin’s inner debate is concerned.
But MAN, that action was awesome. I love the alien-slashing too. Nice stuff there.
No line-by-line edits this time, bud. I have to leave. And I didn’t find any glaring typos. If I have time to go over it again later I will. Otherwise have a great weekend.
OH, and the font on the theme is great for my eyes! Nice and clean, too.
Okay, I checked out the older comments I left, and you know what? Your new theme doesn’t allow the italics HTML tag, which is going to suck eggs and make my edits horribly painful. What tags DOES the comment box permit, so I know where to go with my comment-y goodness?
I think if you use the em tag it works. I’ll make sure that I fix it to work with “I” tags, too. testing the em tag.
Fixed your italics. It was allowing your italics tags, the css reset I’m using had just un-styled them.
great chapter dude cant wait till the next chapter to see all hell break lose. and i am completely ready for the zombies to take back over
Im diggin the theme! Good chapter ^_^ Hope your wife is doing good. Ill be praying for you guys.
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