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	<title>Comments on: Report #1</title>
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	<description>Action Adventure Fiction and Other Stuff from Bryce Beattie</description>
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		<title>By: Bryce Beattie</title>
		<link>http://www.storyhack.com/2012/08/02/report-1/comment-page-1/#comment-54266</link>
		<dc:creator>Bryce Beattie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 03 Aug 2012 13:13:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I think it&#039;s somewhere around 3rd or 4th grade. Just a step up from the &quot;Chapter Books&quot; category, no illustrations. Books at this level would be like the Wizard of Oz series or The Tale of Despereaux, maybe Charlie and the Chocolate Factory.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think it&#8217;s somewhere around 3rd or 4th grade. Just a step up from the &#8220;Chapter Books&#8221; category, no illustrations. Books at this level would be like the Wizard of Oz series or The Tale of Despereaux, maybe Charlie and the Chocolate Factory.</p>
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		<title>By: DarcsFalcon</title>
		<link>http://www.storyhack.com/2012/08/02/report-1/comment-page-1/#comment-54263</link>
		<dc:creator>DarcsFalcon</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 03 Aug 2012 05:39:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I&#039;m looking forward to reading it.  :)

What age group are you targeting?]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m looking forward to reading it.  <img src='http://www.storyhack.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>What age group are you targeting?</p>
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		<title>By: Bryce Beattie</title>
		<link>http://www.storyhack.com/2012/08/02/report-1/comment-page-1/#comment-54261</link>
		<dc:creator>Bryce Beattie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 02 Aug 2012 20:14:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[What happens is that I open up the chapter I&#039;m working on and start reading it at the beginning. Half an hour and a dozen changes later I actually start writing new material. I need to edit, to be be sure, but I also want to feel like I&#039;m making real progress.

And being a fairly short book, I&#039;m actually working from an outline and list of scenes.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What happens is that I open up the chapter I&#8217;m working on and start reading it at the beginning. Half an hour and a dozen changes later I actually start writing new material. I need to edit, to be be sure, but I also want to feel like I&#8217;m making real progress.</p>
<p>And being a fairly short book, I&#8217;m actually working from an outline and list of scenes.</p>
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		<title>By: J. Dane Tyler</title>
		<link>http://www.storyhack.com/2012/08/02/report-1/comment-page-1/#comment-54260</link>
		<dc:creator>J. Dane Tyler</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 02 Aug 2012 18:53:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I hear a lot of garbage about quieting the inner editor too. If I did that I&#039;d have self-published my first real novel with a vanity publishing company and lost my butt to the tune of $1500. My wife, thank goodness, talked me out of doing it.

I also would have already published &lt;em&gt;Ghost Hunters&lt;/em&gt;, which would have besmirched my writerly reputation (yeah, right) and sullied the sequels forever. We need our inner editor.

Maybe you can postpone yours. I&#039;m not sure what you mean when you say it takes you half an hour to get to the writing, and I&#039;m less sure what that has to do with editing, but I can tell you this: Your &quot;inner editor&quot; will be a LOT quieter if you plot/plan things and then do a scene-level outline. Mine certainly is.

Now, if I had the skills to be a writer, I&#039;d be all set. :)

You&#039;ll do great. Just stick to your plan/outline and go.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I hear a lot of garbage about quieting the inner editor too. If I did that I&#8217;d have self-published my first real novel with a vanity publishing company and lost my butt to the tune of $1500. My wife, thank goodness, talked me out of doing it.</p>
<p>I also would have already published <em>Ghost Hunters</em>, which would have besmirched my writerly reputation (yeah, right) and sullied the sequels forever. We need our inner editor.</p>
<p>Maybe you can postpone yours. I&#8217;m not sure what you mean when you say it takes you half an hour to get to the writing, and I&#8217;m less sure what that has to do with editing, but I can tell you this: Your &#8220;inner editor&#8221; will be a LOT quieter if you plot/plan things and then do a scene-level outline. Mine certainly is.</p>
<p>Now, if I had the skills to be a writer, I&#8217;d be all set. <img src='http://www.storyhack.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>You&#8217;ll do great. Just stick to your plan/outline and go.</p>
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